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Pickled Onions and a Beanstalk


Pickled Onions have a horrible effect on me

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Your story was delightful! I love some of the words and verbiage you used in this story "...Then with a FLUBBER, WUBBER, WUMPLE, WUMBLE, GIGGLE, GOGGLE, BOOM the girls shot out of the giant, high into the smelly air...
the story line in this was clever and cute --- definitely it would be appealing to kids, because after all, what kid does NOT giggle at farts (and some adults too)?! Delightful!


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thank you soooo much. Hugs
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Hi Jenny, and so it is. A picture is worth a thousand words. But your wee story is great fun to read. Children will love this as you create such lively and down to earth situations as any child can identify with- and an adult as well. All the best. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thanks Ulla
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This is a fun story. I enjoyed the humorous tone, especially since it's a children's story. The dialog is really effective--sweet, cute and easy to read. I agree too...it will make for a great picture book. :)


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thank you Cindy
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Kiwi: great imagination with the girls on their adventure. Who would
figure that the giant didn't like pickled onions. He spit the girls out.
Good for them. I like how they giggled all night. This must be soooo
fun to read to children. You'll have to add photos. Funny!!! flylikeaneagle


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thank you fly
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Ha, this is a most humorous story in how to outsmart a giant that might just want to make a meal of us. Nothing like a fine trip through the digestive tract to show us the inner workings on the getting fluffed out again.

Most entertaining, Jenny :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    He he he thank you Gloria
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You are such a joy... I always light up when I see a new installation. Your writing is probably right on my reading level. Nonetheless, I can never go wrong with you. Love it. yours, diana


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Oh Diana thank you. Especially for. Six!!!
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This is an EXCELLENT write, well worth a six if I had one. No edits needed. Presented simply. Well written fun write you've penned here. Love the "gassy" interludes, LOL. Just a whole lot of fun this was to read.
Janelle


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    It was a lot of fun to write...but mortifying when I ate pickled onions before school...lol

reply by Lady Jane on 20-Jul-2018
    haha. just too cute!
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I'm actually off FS since the last four weeks or so, and come in only to check on my overflowing inbox to delete and maybe catch something important.

Today I cought yours. As always you turned another fairy story into something funny and delicious. Thank you for that. I still remember and could hear my mum's voice going FEE-FI-FO-FUM! I SMELL THE BLOOD OF AN ENGLISHMAN!

Thanks for precious memories.


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    He he he...yes I used a variation of Fee Fi Fo Fum...I heard that story too as a kid
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There is an old saying, "Beans, Beans good for your heart. The more you eat, the more you fart." I guess there are more foods that have the same talent. This is very well written.


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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    He he he

reply by c_lucas on 20-Jul-2018
    You're welcome, Jenny.
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Oh this is great Jenny and I was imagining my younger grandchildren giggling at this story. Kids would love this story, and the artwork that went with each page would be a blast. Well written, entertaining and very creative.
cheers.


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    Oh Pearl thank you especially for a six
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