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An Owl and the Copycat


My take on Edward Lear's The Owl and the Pussycat...

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BeasPeas
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This is very well written, Tracey. Lyrical, expressive, fun, and well presented with the cute bear. The entire piece flows along at a jaunty clip. Word choices are amusing and rhyme is great. Marilyn


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Marilyn :)
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RGstar
 
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Bravo. A very well done. All who know about the original Owl and The Pussycat will know what a good job you did here.
Expressive and full of charm.
My six stars and a good luck wish in the competition.
Have a great day.
RG


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    Hey RG

    Thank you so much for your review and special rating
    So lovely to hear from you, my friend. I reviewed your most recent post, which I thought was truly magnificent.

    much love

    trimple
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Thomas Bowling
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This is an excellent poem. It's a great entry in the Share a Story in a Poem Poetry contest. You should do very well. Maybe even win. I never do, but I still like to enter.


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Thomas :)
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royowen
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An excellent tongue in cheek poem. Most imaginative and a creative bent in this well written story in a poem, great internal rhyme with some great moments in the work. I love the Beautifully plotted story in a poem, entry, excellent job, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Roy

reply by royowen on 25-Jul-2018
    Welcome
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phill doran
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Ya! Ya! Ya!
A corny pastiche!
Hello Trimple
A wonderful homage to a wonderful poem - excellent stuff. The words 'delightful' and 'intelligent' apply too - I will leave you to determine if they apply to the poem or the poet.
I stumbled over "..."I have an idea," Owl replied;..." - I am looking for "..."I have an idea," Owl replied, sounding queer;..." of something similar for an extra 3-beats. A small point and one over which I am certain to be wrong, so I apologize in advance.
A great start to my weekend reading
cheers
phill


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
    Hello there, Phill

    Thank you for your encouraging review and special rating. I appreciate it very much indeed.

    Glad you enjoyed :)

    KInd regards

    trimple
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this is such a fine little talking animal story, it is cute and it is funny. it is also well written in unique conversational form. very good, Trimble...............meeshu


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    cheers you Meeshu :)
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pome lover
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very clever and original.
I especially liked the first two lines, "went to see," etc.
Also, "Slurped from the jars of trainees... trainees? trainees! too cute.
What fun you must've had writing this. It's kind of like "fractured fairy tales."
well done.
pomde lover


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Cheers, pome lover
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Hi Twilight, of course the Queen bee will make a hive for honey....look at the look on that bears face....heartbreaking...LOL...sometimes being call a Queen just goes to a persons head...well...I'm glad between the Owl...and the bear...they changed her mind...LOL...sweet lady...this was a fun read my friend...I love your poem you...and love the picture...you just want to take him home...very nicely written...love you lots...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
    Hiya, TWosocks

    Thanks ever so much for your review and sixer to boot.

    Indeed this is one lucky, mucky-pawed bear :)


reply by l.raven on 25-Jul-2018
    LOL you...he's a cutie...and you are always so welcome sweet lady...smiling...love xxoo

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
    :)

reply by l.raven on 25-Jul-2018
    smiling back at you...xxoo love
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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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This speaks how the old bear has managed to save him from the imminent by telling something imaginary to provide the queen, poor bear could not be blamed; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you
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Anne B Francis
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Ah this made me smile it was quite humerous and enjoyed the - wing, wing and the trainees/trainees appeared to my sense of humour. Very well written


Anne


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
    Thank you
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