I think a tidal wave could knock you off your feet. You might even get hurt. Hey, who's kidding who? You might drown! But isn't that what love is all about?
You start off with a terrific simile,
"Like a tidal wave"
I love the seashore!
This is beautiful, I love the comparison of the "tidal wave" and love being a constant. The presentation is lovely, and your use of punctuation excellent and I usually do like punctuation is short pieces. This should do very well.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
Thank you, Val
Punctuation has never come easy to me, but I'm learning... slow but sure :)
Thank you ever so much for your review and comments.
This speaks how you would feel to describe his state of love assurance, he comes like a tidal wave and reassures you of love with new promise and goes back and repeats; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
-Very nice image and presentation, Trimple.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the image in the first line.
-You use it well to develop the
main idea in your poem of how
he reassures you.
-Good luck in the contest.