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Morning Delight


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  8 total reviews 
Comment by
GowerHug
 
 
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Brilliant. Actually did LOL here. If I had a 6 star I'd give it for this. Love this funny, sunny story. I hope you win your contest - you deserve to for this. I'm a fan!


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
    Thanx again for your review here, ma'am! :) :) Know we've conversed since, but I really don't like to leave any reviews unanswered....just a little behind this week! :) :) Sending blessings for a week ahead of shadey-tree moments and smiles....:) :) Yvette
Comment by
misscookie
 
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Mm, I like the artwork you chooses to go with your poem
It captured my attention from the start
Oh how I wish my love was still here for me to fix him breakfast and hold me oh so close.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Thank you so very much for your review, Miss Cookie -- I am appreciative for your taking the time to read (and hopefully enjoy!) my work! :) :) :) So glad it could give you some warm memories for the morning ... enjoy those wonderful grandchildren! :) ;)

reply by misscookie on 26-Jul-2018
    Your very welcome my great grand daughter and her granddad just left after straightning up the living room I need a nap[ LOL
    Cookie
    Take care
    Cookie
Comment by
diamondbogle
 
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I love this. Its pleasant to read. Very well put together and flows nicely. I noticed no errors. Held my attention throughtout. Overall very well done.


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Held your attention throughout....do seven words usually have trouble doing that...? Glad they flowed okay for you as well...
    Thanx for your review. :) :) :)

reply by diamondbogle on 26-Jul-2018
    Sometimes seven words do have trouble holding my attention. I have an issue with depth perception and light variance in my eyes which makes reading from a laptop or phone difficult for me sometimes so yeah seven words can be a real pain to read. Generally if the poem isn?t worth my time, even with seven words, I won?t read it because I can?t. Yours was really well put together, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It held my attention, which made me want to read it.

    Thanks for your reply,
    Diamond
Comment by
mally mack
 
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Clever, so very clever. I giggled out loud, I wont lie. Sausage is a funny word right?! This is so great. Should turn it into a meme as well, no kidding!!!

Best of luck to you
Mallory


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    HOORAY! Mallory, you get the GOLDEN AWARD for the day!!! Out of all the reviews thus far, YOU and one other reviewer were the only ones to read this as it was intended....pure innuendo! :) :) :) I really enjoyed writing this one -- had originally intended to go for something deep and serious, but couldn't pass this up once my brain just put it out there (so to speak!)! :) :) :) I think, when it comes to short ones such as this, it becomes QUITE obvious the reviewers who simply cut/paste some general words no matter the piece.....not sure how this one "flows nicely" or "holds your attention throughout" or even how it is "very enjoyable to read".......very disheartening, but c'est la vie, oui?! :) :) :) All this to say, thank you so very much for your sincere review, ma'am, and I appreciate your taking the time to actually read my work! :) :) Have a great remainder of the week! :) :)

reply by mally mack on 26-Jul-2018
    Wow! I can't believe anyone could miss it? We are all writers hahaha How completely silly. I too have noticed the same with certain people's reviews. Although I have been lucky so far and only had one that truly upset me. A lot of people seem to just want to money that goes with the reviewing. I however don't care how much something pays. If it is good quality or entertaining, I'm staying!

    There are times that I find no flaws with writings and can do nothing but say something positive. I feel that many of us produce work that came so naturally - there is no reason to alter it.

    I do hope to read more of your writing and thank you for the cool reply! Have a great day

    -Mal-
Comment by
Tootie
 
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This is great! I really like it! The title, the pic and the words are awesome. Very well done. Wishing you the very best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for your review, Cathy -- I always appreciate your taking the time to read (and hopefully enjoy!) my work. :) ;) :) I enjoyed writing this one -- had originally intended to go for something deep and serious, but couldn't pass this up once my brain just put it out there (so to speak!)! :) :) :) Is there more there than the surface of the words? Perhaps. Guess I leave that up to the reader to discern (writer grins like the Chesire cat....) :) :) Have a great remainder of the week, sir! :) :)
Comment by
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2017 Short Works and 2017 Script Writer of the Year.
Thomas Bowling
 
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This is an excellent entry in the Seven Words or Less poem contest. I wish you the best of luck. May the gods of poetry look favorably on you. Or as my grandmother would say. Bless this mess.


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for your review, Monsieur Bowling -- I always appreciate your taking the time to read (and hopefully enjoy!) my work. :) ;) :) I enjoyed writing this one -- had originally intended to go for something deep and serious, but couldn't pass this up once my brain just put it out there (so to speak!)! :) :) :) Is there more there than the surface of the words? Perhaps. Guess I leave that up to the reader to discern (writer grins like the Chesire cat....) :) :) Have a great remainder of the week, sir! :) :)
Comment by
LeftHandedScribe
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This poem, on several levels, is just delicious. The food references combined with the yummy photo of these two in blissful love, is just so happy making.


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for your review, Shauna -- I always appreciate your taking the time to read (and hopefully enjoy!) my work. :) ;) :)Perhaps you are correct about the 'delicious' -- guess that's left up to the reader to discern (writer grins like the Chesire cat....) :) :) Have a great remainder of the week! :) :)
Comment by
Mary Hollingsworth
 
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Well you got me ready for breakfast what about a couple of scramble on the side or sunny side up to make it complete I'm ready got my Fork ready to dig in. The poem meets the requirements and the picture suggest that it may be a little bit more than breakfast going on LOL


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for your review, Mary -- I always appreciate your taking the time to read (and hopefully enjoy!) my work. :) ;) :)Perhaps you are correct about the lil bit more -- guess that's left up to the reader to discern (writer grins like the Chesire cat....) :) :) Have a great remainder of the week! :) :)
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