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Even the mature are young at heart.

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Getting together with friends young and old from military life brings happiness to those who have served for the greater good of our country


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
    Thank you, country ranch writer, for your words and the excellent rating. They are greatly appreciated. Catherin

reply by country ranch writer on 28-Jul-2018
    SMILES
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What a great description of the joys of aging and the joys of basking in the sun and participating in our wonderful world. These descriptions are so relevant to the mood that the author was trying to portray in the poem: "azure sky" "marshmallow clouds" and "lush green emerald coast." These lines set the tone for this entry and create a scene of comfortable feeling of growing old while still being able to appreciate our natural surroundings. And the last line says it all: "To flip gray curls of young at heart." I really like this poem. I don't see any grammatical or spelling errors and find that the tone was effectively set. Good work! Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
    Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating, Insignificant Weed. They are greatly appreciated.
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We are in Florida for a few more days...visiting our daughter with her new baby, Liam our grandson...it's not so much beaches and sand though we've swum in the pool...more like cuddles and kisses and changing diapers
God bless....love your poem


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
    Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating. They are greatly appreciated.
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The images and descriptions are so well drawn. I like how you wait to introduce our characters until the end--makes it clear that these views are from their perspective.


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
    Thank you for you comments, Shauna, and the excellent rating.
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