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Give Me All of Your Chocolate and No-One Gets Hurt!

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Hi Diana. This is a good entry for the contest..., I think. Is chocolate the loved one about whom this poem was written. The contest says the poem must address a loved one. I hope Chocolate qualifies as a loved one. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing


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I so agree, you can always rely on Chocolate, a woman's loyal friend! Love your words and you have now made my mouth water, I want chocolate! Love Dolly x


 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018


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I couldn't agree more! Chocolate is the soul of awesomeness to me, and this poem is entirely true. The easiest way to melt a heart is to melt a chocolate one and send it to a loved one. That's all I've got to say!


 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018


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yes... it made me hungry too --- for a nice chocolate chip cookie and hot cocoa... yummm.... your poem is clever, cute, and it made me smile... I love the picture -- perfect for your poem... a heart made out of chocolate, how apropos, right? You love chocolate, and I can tell, that chocolate loves YOU! Now that is a Perfect love affair!! :)


 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018


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Delicious and warming as well as providing a dose of humor for the reader -- I still feel your bruised heart within these lines, friend, but I love that you are entertaining all of us as you work through it....I hope your 'prose therapy' is working (along with a lot of chocolate and breezy evenings with a touch of wine)!! :) :)

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) :) Yvette


 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
    Hey Y.M. You are correct kiddo... chocolate is yummy and healing... and thanks for your thoughtfelt and big heart... You are sweet! Yours, dianaxo
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Your poem and the picture you selected made me hungry as well, even though I had a chocolate covered ice cream bar for dessert--it's hard to have too much chocolate!
Thanks for the fun and the comfort! Best wishes in the contest and sweet dreams- Joan


 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
    Hi Joan E.
    I'm turning into chocolate. thanks so much kiddo, yours, diana

reply by Joan E. on 01-Aug-2018
    What a delightful dilemma! Smiles- Joan
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Hurray for chocolate! Your poem touts its merits and I'm with you on this. Addictive for sure. This is a fun 3-line poem that brings a smile. Much luck in the contest with this "sweet" entry. Marilyn


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
    The world would be a much sadder place (if that is possible, kidding) without it. yours, diana
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Oh, my. This has me going, because I love chocolate. I don't have it too often, because once I get started, I can't stop. Chocolate will love you back. Great topic, and you have correctly used a 5-7-7 format. (I'm afraid I pronounce chocolate with two syllables, but it's just habit.) You seem to have a neat reference to love tied in with this, too. Hot, commitment, and faithful relate that way. Great work, and best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
    Judiverse... chocolate loves me back often... my husband finds me in a stupor with chocolate all over my face and has to revive me. yours, diana

reply by judiverse on 01-Aug-2018
    You're welcome. I know what you mean about chocolate! judi
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Chocolate yes warm and soul soothing,,,only thing better is New Zealand Whiteaker's artisan chocolate with a flat white coffee,...oh my oh my
Well written and great photo..made me lick my iPad
God bless


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
    Kiwijenny... yum, yum, My mouth is watering and I need to double up my caffein with an espresso... I'm flying. thanks so much for your lovely review. yours, diana
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Excellent. Love how each line starts with chocolate. Great themes with the commitment and faithful attributes. I just bought some dark chocolate peanut clusters, now I'm gonna have to eat one. Always a pleasure. Hugh


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2018



reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
    Oh Peanut clusters... I'm n a coma... thanks so much yours, diana
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