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Wendy Turpin


My darling cousin is dying

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Oh dear, I am so sorry, so sorry for her, as well your feelings. I was expecting bad news in the poem, yet , expectantly found it in the write.
Life, its just unexplainable, but if could, I say one word. Short.
Best wishes.
RG


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018
    I'm so sorry for her too and us. Hugs
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Boogienights
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In sorry to hear about your cousin. Isn't it amazing as all the wonderful memories you have of the three of you together? Some people can't remember yesterday let alone all the happy times. Your words brought to life how much you loved and cared for her. Did you read it to her? You should.


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018
    Yes my sister read it to her. And many others. Thank you
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Wow Jenny there is some magical imagery in these words, the raw friendship of children and the connections they make last forever in memories, you relived those memories here in this lovely magical poem, so sad that these rememberances are tinned with sadness just now, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018
    Yes they are....amazingly Wendy walked around the hospice grounds with my dad yesterday...something the doctors said she'd never do,keep praying
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HI kiwiJenny
I thank you for this wonderful poem. You took me on a journey as I was so absorbed in your adventures. The imagery is superb. I love your photo,. So sorry about your cousin.
God bless. Jen.


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
    Thank you Jen especially for stars. Wendy is a star . The most smiley person I know. Thank you
    Jen
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kiwi jenny,
I like your family poetry. nothing can i say but it;s awesome! The picture so clear and everyone is beautiful.' keep the good work!

Reveline


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
    Oh Revelina thank you for your review and stars. What a beautiful name
    Jenny
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So sorry to hear about your cousin. I hope she has a chance to read this. Such a heartfelt story of love and friendship. I won't go into analyzing this, just know that it is so good and from the heart. It touched me. Hugh


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
    Thanks Hugh. My sister read it to her. She's read several of my poems to her through this ordeal. I'm 10,000 miles away in distance but not in spirit
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It's so sad when losing a friend Jenny, I've lost a few, including my brother to that dread disease. I'm so sorry that you're going through it. Well done, a beautifully written tribute to your cousin my friend. My sympathy, I know what it feels like, well done, I'm well aware of the "lilt" you speak of. The vowels change dramatically, some broader than others. Well done Jenny, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
    Thank you. Just pray hugs
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Jenny, I really loved reading this about your fun time with your Wendy, Debbie and yourself. That is a really nice picture of you three. I am so sorry about the cervical cancer. She will be in my prayers as well as yourself. lovely write! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2018



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    Thank you es[ecially for prayers
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I could feel your pain as I read this poem. It is very well written and flows smoothly. The words you chose are excellent for the emotion of the poem. I will pray for your cousin and family.


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
    Thanks Barbara that means so much to me
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Hello kiwijenny
What a nice free verse of you telling us readers the wonderful times you had made me smile then to read your cousin Wendy Turpin is terminal ill.
Gert


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
    Thanks Gert . Please pray

reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Aug-2018
    You are Welcome and Yes I will pray for Wendy
    Gert
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