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Constancy!


Creates Clarity...

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dragonpoet
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Congratulations of placing second in the contest.

The words and artwork mesh well. This definition of truth and trust is rife with alliteration which makes it more rhythm and accentuates the emotion.

Keep writing
Joan


 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018


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Yeah, I wasn't onboard with the message since "truth" is an extremely subjective and played-out term. And many people don't believe in telling a "truth" at all, so it isn't their "tale." And I'm not sure what you mean by "tethered. Tethered to what? But thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018


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I really like this Diana. This is very witty and very clever. I like the well thought out message that's conveyed here. You've done a beautiful job presenting this well written poem along with the accompanying artwork. Great job and well done!


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Hi Jeffrey... thanks so much for dropping by and reading today soooooo very much... yours, diana
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Super alliteration of the letter "t" in this cleverly written poem. Illustrated well. Through the truth, we build trust that stands the test of time. Good job. Marilyn


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Hey BeasPeas... always a pleasure. Yours, diana
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This is good start to finish the artwork and equation is exceptional logic and the poem is so true. I would very much like to read other whimsies from you 1-54. larry


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2018


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A this is a very meaningful four line poem. I really enjoyed reading it. A lot said in very few words. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Thanks so much Jenintorre... a very thoughtful review. yours, diana
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A very nice four line poem. I love the message and the alliteration. It flows smoothly. The lowercase throughout works as well.

Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with this gem of a poem.


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Hey Sis Cat... thanks so much for your wonderful review. yours, diana
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Mathematically your equation, trust = constancy over time would rate a six plus. I loved the absolute accuracy of that statement. The alliteration also deserves a high mark, sadly I have no sixes left. I see in the author's notes you call this whimsy # 55. I'd love to read it's 54 predecessors.


 Comment Written 09-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Hey Bob... thanks for the theoretical six it is much appreciated. yours, diana
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Hello Diana,
An excellent alliterating extravaganza for the four line contest
I like the equation in the art work, constancy over time
somehow, I think clarity got a little tangled in the last line
But the judges are more perceptive than I
Best wishes in the contest
Robert


 Comment Written 09-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Hey RS... thanks for your review... yours, diana
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Pam (respa)
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-I like the artwork and presentation, diana.
-The syllable count is good.
-You get your message across well
with the use of words beginning with 't'.
-I like the idea of linking truth and trust
to a tale and test that stand the tests of time!
-Good luck in the contest.



 Comment Written 09-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
    Hey Pam... Thanks ever so... yours, diana

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Sep-2018
    You are very welcome, diana.
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