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'Ol Redbeak is happy right where he is...

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Two for the price of one! Can't be bad!! lol. The Parakeets are a lovely bird, and I would think an ideal 'pet' for the elderly, especially the lonely ones. They could have quite a chat with these birds. I loved the poem, its a lovely one for the contest. Good luck! :) Sandra xxx


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


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this is not excellent entry in this contest. An unusual subject for entry, but it fits well. The abab rhyming works sweetly, and refrain line in between verses gives flight, they appear as bridges to the standard, well dine, an excellent entry, good luck, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


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Great format with the two for one poems, it works nicely, and your final line leaves me with the sense that he's a happy bird, in his own special place. Good luck in the contest,
cheers.


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


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I really enjoyed reading this poem. Your words create perfect imagery. Well chosen illustration. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


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I enjoyed the smooth flow of the rhyming words and how they sound so fluid. The author was able to capture the imagination of the readers effectively and the picture enhanced the message intended by the author.


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018


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Yes a really interesting and unusual poem within a poem. I've never seen that before, though I'm a writer not a Professor of Poetic Styles - perhaps it's a named style and I'm unaware?At first the single inserted lines are very confusing, but I eventually worked it out.

I particularly like the way you've used "fleeting sense" in this case as a combined adjectival pair. Unusual and something I'd do as well. I also really like the fact you have comprehensive Writers Notes, which is something I do religiously, so people can find the inspiration behind or the explanation of a poem with some depth.

Overall a fine piece and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Bill (WildWithWords)




 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


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Dear Mystery Writer,

Yours is the first entry I have read in this highly unusual contest. I am not sure what the requirements are, but I enjoyed your poem.

The first two stanzas are my favorites. To be honest, the third seemed to wander a bit. (Sorry!)

The poem within a poem is a cool concept I don't think I've seen before. Nice touch!

I wish you the best of luck in voting!


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


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I enjoyed reading this poem about the parakeet that may ponder the freedom of other birds but enjoys his present circumstances and is happy to stay put.
Wonderful rhyming and meter.
I like the added poetic lines forming the second poem.
Nancy


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


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Dear Anonymous Poet,

Thank you for sharing your entry in the Rhyming Poetry contest.

Your descriptions and verse combine perfectly to tell the tale of a pet bird. He watches the feathered friends outside, only to realize how lucky he is.

Good luck in the contest,

Mustang Patty


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


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Very nice rhyming, and the picture is beautiful. This is a work of poetry that both makes me sad, and wonder whether animals do, indeed, have some ancient sense of the past. I really liked it! Please keep writing and sharing.




 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018


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