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Touch


My thoughts on life.

  21 total reviews 
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Jean Hornby
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This is exeptional . A lot of knowledge and home truths here. You know the bible and have written a deep interpretation of how things were and how things have been .
So had to give you a special star for a very special poem ..... Keep writing !


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2018



reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
    Thanks Jean.
    I enjoyed creating this
    Doctor Ricky1024

reply by Jean Hornby on 13-Nov-2018
    Hi Ricky , I gave you a six star rating for "Touch "
    But can't see that six stars is showing for your work.
    Is is showing for you ? If not I will get intouch with admin
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karenina
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This is a nebulous trail to follow...as is the power of touch, I think. Be it physical, emotional or spiritual, the human spirit is not meant to exist in a vacuum. Each of us hungers for the validation of touch to give us meaning, to buttress our faith...

Karenina


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Sounds like my work was not wasted here.
    Thanks Karenina and have a blessed day.
    Doctor Ricky...
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A beautiful description of touch and the sharing of all that God's love can offer. Very inspirational. The photo you choose was special. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Thanks Cindy, this was important to me.
    Ricky...
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I like your verses about the Triplets creating nature, the reptiles, fish and animals. This is an excellent faith based poem that tells the human story in poetic form. I also like how you show science and religion as the same. Excellent free verse form and you have a strong steady beat that makes this a poem to be read out loud.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Glad you dug it Elaine.
    I knew you would like the part about the sea and it's creatures.
    Ricky....
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In my opinion, I am practically speechless - this is an incredible read in its detailed account of creation, genesis, and our world today - the pleasure, the pain, the purpose and the suggestion of the Apocalypse. What a read - I was transfixed. To me, it does not adhere to any particular form, because of its emotional and dramatic expression - a new form in what I would describe as epic...


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Thanks all my here was worth it.
    Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by evesayshi on 22-Sep-2018
    You are very welcome...Eve
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Hello Ricky1024
Your title to your free verse poem is very good, why I relive what you are saying (in your long way)
of telling us about how we should touch on that it wasn't God Himself it was the three in one
God, Son and the Holy Spirit is the way that how Earth was created.
Gert


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this Gert.
    Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Gert sherwood on 22-Sep-2018
    You are welcome Ricky
    Gert
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I found this to be a very interesting, well written poem. I really liked the language you used to personify creation story, and thought referring to the trinity as the triplets was clever. It definitely held my attention and made me want to ready more. Thanks for sharing!


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
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This goes through all of the creation story in Genesis. I think there are some good points. But it is a too long for my liking. I can't tell if the poem ended at the date or it was meant to continue and you didn't change the location of the date.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Thanks Dragon.
    Out of about twenty reviews all were fives and sixes.
    Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Sep-2018
    You're welcome.

    dp

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A. Willow Bends
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Very interesting, to go from Biblical to New Jersey. Creative and unique. I like what you are doing. Very different approach to things, which is poetically wonderful, in my opinion. Good Luck and Keep doing what you are doing! :)
Wendy


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this Willow.
    Ricky
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I must admit. I read through the whole, yet, as deep as it was, throuh the various stages, it was far too long to hold on to its understanding with the various stages it went through.

Having said that, I always like to read from you, for I know it will be guts, heart and depth.

Yu took a great deal of care and time with this, and I always like to see things written with care and attention.

Good luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this lengthy piece.
    Based on four sources.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
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