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Jack, The Snowshoe Hare


This story is for very young children.

  26 total reviews 
Comment by
PoemsOfDD
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Pam, a most enjoyable story for children. If my children were younger I would be reading them this story. It is fun and educational and encourages children in their friendships - which come in all shapes and sizes. A great piece of work. ~DD


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
    Thanks for the review, DD. I am glad you liked my story. I appreciate your comments about reading it to children and sharing the idea of friendship with them. I have a new one I am posting on Sun. I hope you will stop by.
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Ben Colder
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It is story such as this that start children into reading and learning about nature. I see nothing wrong with this story. I am a fan of National Geographic's and Nova. Well done Pam. .


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
    Thanks for the review, Ben. I am glad you liked the story. I appreciate your comments. We like the nature shows in our house, too. I will have a new children's story for next Sun. It is the first time I have tried stories.
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Pam,
Excellent job! I read this with the eyes of my preschool grandchildren. They would love reading about Jack. You present facts in an entertaining manner; children will learn without realizing it.


Oceanna


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the review, Oceanna. I am glad you liked the story, and appreciate your commenets about reading with your preschool grandchildren in mind. I also like your comment about children learning without realizing it. That is an important concept.
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frogbook
 
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I think this is a great story for a young child-educational and fun, written at an age appropriate level of understanding. (By the way-I liked it too-ha!)


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the review, frogbook. I am glad you liked my story for a young child and found it age appropriate, educational, and fun. It's fun for adults, too!!
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rspoet
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Hello Pam,
A wonderful story for children, full of smiles,
from its furry feet to its magical fur.
Excellent line about it being fun to be different
and mentioning taking naps.
The story shows how different, yet how alike, even a rabbit is.
The connection with Beau reinforces the idea of friendship.
Great picture to match
Well done
Children will love this story.
Robert




 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the exceptional rating and review, Robert. I am glad you liked my story about Jack and his furry feet, magical fur, and naps!! I am also glad you liked the theme of friendship, being different, the connection with Beau, and the picture. I appreciate it that you think children will love it.
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Good story. Youu gathered plenty of information and expressed it so nicely and comprensively for a young child to read and learn, even a parent reading to a small child will absorb some entertainment. WELL DONE


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the review, Tpa. I am glad you liked the story, and I appreciate your comments about how the information was expressed.
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Gloria ....
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What a gorgeous picture that is, Pam. The bunny looks quite pleased with himself.

I think this is a great story for very young children. The more they are introduced into real life animals and situations, the better.

Terrific write my friend :)

Gloria



 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Gloria. I am glad you liked the picture and the story. I agree with you about being introduced to real situations about animals and situations. Much appreciated, my friend.
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fm wright
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A most beautiful example of a young child's story. I like the way it informs because it is done in a most entertaining manner. The whole story stayed on thought and flowed quite well, as though it were a poem in prose form. Very nicely written.


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the review, fm wright. I am glad you liked my children's story, and the way it informs for a child. I appreciate your comments about how it flowed like a prose poem.
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Hugh McDowell
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Pam, this is a very interesting and entertaining story for a young child. I can very well imagine a child asking the questions that you answer in the story. Also, a very good story for an older sibling to read to a younger one. I've published a children's story titled, The Bear Who Loved Hats. My hope was similar, that older children would have fun reading to younger kids. Excellent. Hugh


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the review, Hugh. I haven't seen any postings by you in a while. I am glad you liked my story and could imagine a child responding to it, as well as an older sibling reader to a younger one. Thanks for sharing about your story. Where did you have it published?

reply by Hugh McDowell on 25-Sep-2018
    On amzn, kindle. Been doing a lo of reviewing. Hugh

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
    Thanks for sharing.
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Sally Law
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This is precious and sweet! My granddaughter will love this. You are an excellent children's writer. I am so glad to see your work here on FanStory.
Kindest regards to you and yours, etc. and etc.
Sally


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    Thanks for the review, Sally. I appreciate your comments and am glad your grandaughter will like it. I have been on FS about 3 and a half years. I usually write poems, so writing these little children's stories is a new venture for me. I appreciate your compliment about the writing.

reply by Sally Law on 24-Sep-2018
    You?re welcome,e. My pleasure entirely! Sal

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    Thank you, Sal.
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