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Somethings don't add up


5-7-5 poem.

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Sankey
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Haha this was a funny one. NO spags and I loved the picture as well. I came by looking for you as you did a review of my autobiography a long time ago. I wanted to saee how many of the old reviewers were still around as a lot have left FS, sadly. A lot has happened since then and I am on a final promotion of the entire book if you want to look. Cheers.


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
    Thank you vey much.
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a very cute and clever poem... it is original, and funny... you have met the requirements of the contest perfectly, and I think you have a strong entry... Good luck! :)


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much for your kind words i am so happy that you found it funny.
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Ah, obviously a person who always drew outside the lines! Lol. I like this; represent a creative way of viewing the world. Who's to say not equally valid. Excellent work. Hugh


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much.
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Haha nice one, its better to make two and two twenty two than four.. Since its more.. Picture dipicts the helplessness of the character. Best of luck for the contest.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much.
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Haha! Not bad. Yes, sometimes math dyslexia hits us all, LOL. Very cute and clever five - seven - five. Good use of words, artwork, colors and layout for an appealing appearance. Great job!


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much.
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated!
-The syllable count is good.
-I guess things don't always
add up the way they're supposed to.
-You have a humorous approach
to "new math" and addition.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you .

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Oct-2018
    You are welcome.
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the humor contest
Math teachers will enjoy your "new" math
It is a good way to increase anything you have
Interesting art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much
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Well, this is humorous, Mystery Author. Good job with the contest prompt--your syllable count is correct per line. Your choice of art is a great pairing, too. Best wishes. Jan


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about maths that seem not to add up as expected. It depends on how we add our numbers will give us the answers we want to get.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much. I am sorry for the tardiness in replying.
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This is a somewhat funny 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the prompt. It makes me think of our four year old grandson that when I ask him what 1 plus 1 is he insists it is 10! lol. I hold up the fingers and everything. No changing his mind yet! Very cute what you have done! Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much.
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