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ABDCE rose buds


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This explanation and example are good products when discussing a 'plot line'. EXPOSITION, RISING ACTION, CLIMAX, FALLING ACTION, and RESOLUTION. Neat.


 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018


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Creative approach that beats the tar out of other entries. I love the extended metaphor of a story being a rose. Great way to remember the ingredients that go into a story with the alphabet letters. Especially great that you gave an example. Sorry to be out of sixes, but I did vote for you.


 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018


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Hi,
I enjoyed the message in your essay. I particularly liked the way you combined your personal experience with writing and the instructional section with the letters ABDCE. You wrote a lovely closing paragraph too, especially the last line. It reminded me of confetti.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


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Never heard or saw it put into words like this. Pretty simple formula. I guess my only question is if the protagonist or antagonist always have to change or learn something by the end of the story. Real life suggests that doesn't always happen, or we wouldn't have numbers after some of our wars. Keep writing.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


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Thanks for sharing this technique. Haven't heard of it before. I like the simplicity of the process. I liked the short story. The conclusion (staying away from tootsie rolls) was excellent. Hugh


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


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I like how you share the rules of story writing you learned in your writing course. You explain the ABDCE method clearly. Using a personal anecdote to illustrate wasa good idea. I am not sure the rose metaphor is necessary to open your essay. I would begin with paragraph two. Also, you should clarify that these story-telling rules apply to both fiction and non-fiction.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


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This is very good putting words of wisdom out there for all to learn. Learn we do by trial and error as we write into the wold of words. Good work and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2018


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