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Parents are the Problem with Youth


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Lady Jane
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Your work has 49 words. '

It isn't just the administration(,) it is parents, delusional parents who believe their kid can do no wrong. (Ludicrous) - this is word 50, if you want to use it or add another somewhere else. I think here is a good place to add one word for dramatic pause :P

Your writing is clean and relatable. Yes, deal with the consequences. Well formatted and clearly conveyed, writer. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. You'll definitely get some feedback on this one. I complete understand what you mean. Parents oft times turn a blind eye and children suffer because of it. Again, great piece. good luck.
Janelle


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
    Thank you for your comments. I counted 50. I will of course double check.

reply by Lady Jane on 14-Oct-2018
    copy and paste it into word or grammarly.com. It will give you an accurate count :)

    Regardless, it is an excellent write. Just don't want you to get that silly little email saying 'it's not ready' for vote, LOL...

    Me

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
    Honestly, I recounted and got 50.

reply by Lady Jane on 14-Oct-2018
    Ok, then my word counter got it wrong both times. It happens. Great entry, dear ;-)
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I have heard how difficult parents can be. Times have changed, I remember when teachers had authority. Parents also have the first influence on their children and should set an example.


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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
    Yeah, parents (and I have two kids in middle school, so I can speak from experience as well as professionally--and both parents are teachers)--parents suck.
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How parents of school kids are sometime more than real problems of school teaching and how hard it is to keep school run and teaching well is well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR


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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
    Thank you. It is a crumbling system, sadly.
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In some cases the writer has a point, but not all. Teaching is team work with the parents. I must agree that if the parents shows no interest what can a teacher do?
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
    It is supposed to be teamwork. That really doesn't apply anymore. And it isn't just the indifferent parents. Kids like that, shown no interest, can be helped. It is the spoiled brats whom the parents believe can do not wrong. Thank you for your comments.

reply by Ben Colder on 14-Oct-2018
    I understand
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