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A detached penis hurtles to its end

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This is a great entry for this contest. I like the point of view you chose and that character you developed that point of view. I laughed, despite the dark theme.
Good Luck!


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2018


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How could fiction be stranger than the story of John Wayne Bobbett and his passionate wife Lorena...I have a United Cutlery collectable lockback engraved
"Lorena's Wienie Whacker" I also have 'coons that steal my cat food...good luck in the contest...


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Thank you. Yeah, that was a fascinating story and I remember it pretty well. It was not an inspiration for this, but is something worth pursuing (not literally) in some future endeavor that is as crass and bloody as this.
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A sad end to a once proud penis. Good luck in the contest. You're going to need it. I heard Lorain Bobbit submitted an entry. It was something she had laying around the house.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
    She would probably beat me. I only pulled this one out of my ass. Thanks. We all know I have no chance whatsoever of winning this. The one about the cock growing angel's wings and soaring into the loving arms of Jesus will no doubt defeat me.
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Well, that was an interesting perspective. I mean, if it could talk...would it feel that way? Probably, I don't know, this theme is so odd! But still, I believe you managed to make this interesting with the POV.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Thank you. This was fun to write, a break, I suppose, from the otherwise grueling misery I tend to dwell within. Thanks again.
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Well, you certainly did the character sketch a whole lot of honour. I found the read on the macabre side - complete with the accompanying artwork - but I soon got along with the poor fellow just fine, seeing as to how articulate and detachedly intimate.

Excellent is my verdict!


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
    Thank you. Everything can be given a personality with a little self-reflection.
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Yes inspite of the outlandishness of the prompt you have managed to write the autobiography of an all important organ.Just tools of pleasure...?
and the trials and tribulations it has to go thro be fore it landed in the tras bin
well done it has acquired a serious tone...


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
    Thank you for your comments. This was fun to write, away from something serious for a moment. I originally intended for this to be much more disgusting than it turned out to be. I guess I liked him. Thanks again.
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The writing is worth a five and maybe a six, but I can't forgive you for even entering this vulgar contest so I decided on a four. Well, what more can I say...I think you're a great writer, but not good at resisting tasteless topics?

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
    You're probably right about the temptation of this topic for me. Honestly, my initial thoughts were much more vile than what it became. But I am writing so much serious and extremely sad material lately. I needed a palate cleanser. Thank you for your comments.
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Listen, yes, I did not see the title of the prompt until after, which added to my thoughts of how good a write this is.
I found myself wondering why and where you would get an idea to write what is written, or whether there was a deeper meaning for it. I now see it was a competition title.

This is my idea of a winner. Strong in narrative, sensible in its morbid nature.

You certainly can write, for this was not easy a subject and was always going to have to be comedy, but there was a dark sense of it here...and expertly handled.
Well done.
I am wishing you luck in the competition. This was worth a sixth star, but I am afraid not enough to go around.

Good luck with it.
Best wishes.
RGstar


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
    Thank you for your generous comments. This was fun to write. Most of my material (both here and elsewhere) is very grim and usually quite serious. This was a relaxation exercise that brings me back to the days when I was younger. Thanks again.
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I've always wondered what a penis would think as it was dying. (Not. LOL)
This was brilliant and not the lease disgusting. In fact, I was sympathetic for the little fellow. He'd had a hard life ( or rather ... a difficult life). No penis should be so mistreated and then merely discarded. (Are there rescue agencies available? Fund me pages? Others like him need help.)

I should have a six for this, but am all out. So sorry. :(

Best of luck in this contest.
:) e


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
    Thank you for the comment. I figure, since he's just gonna get eaten by a raccoon in a trash dumpster, there probably aren't any agencies around who can help him. Maybe a severed penis for fortunate? Or better cared for?
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lol, I liked this one! My boyfriend liked it too! Outlandish as it is, I'm having fun reading all the good and funny stories you've all written so far.



 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
    Thank you. I originally wanted to be much more disgusting, but I got interested in the character of this severed penis.
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