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A detached penis hurtles to its end

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I thought that was really good. I didn't find it vulgar at all. It does go through a lot, especially when it comes to cancer. You took this prompt and wrote a really good story from the POV of the penis. Well done! This is a good contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thank you. Sometimes it is fun to write a joke complete with a punchline.
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Hi Lance,

you know, your author notes are always a dead giveaway in blind competitions.

A unique kind of take on this ridiculous prompt. I'm sure I wasn't ever betting on reading a story from a penis's perspective on FA.

Technically sound. Should be interesting in the booths.
GMG



 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
    This author considered going full out violent gore with this piece and then decided to settle for the essentially mild POV approach that this wound up becoming. It took about four minutes to write and there was a cursory edit afterwards. Considering the topic and what a reader should expect, I might actually have a shot at this one, which would be a point of pride for my homepage--the only win, ripped off dick story! Thank you for your comments.
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This had to have been hard to write. The prompt lokked to be too much of a challenge for me. Having the penis fly after being torn off of body has me crossing my legs in empathy. Ouch!


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
    It was surprisingly easy to write. Take the idea of going to far and then try going two steps further. I don't know if I succeeded, but that was the general idea. I love it when graphic shit like this occasionally becomes acceptable. Thanks for your comments.
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Hahahaha! Oh man!

I laughed and I cringed and I laughed some more at this one.

It wasn't until after I read this through and saw that it was a contest entry that I realized the poor writer had no choice in the topic. That it wasn't the evil and perverted mind of a man that came up with this particular work - the desecration of all that most men hold near and dear ("hold" being somehow appropriate).

It was a woman! I might've known!

One aside I found particularly funny was.... "All I can see is wet blackness (and I know I don't have eyes)," I fear I must intervene here and point out that a one-eyed pocket python DOES indeed have a single "eye". What's more, in my opinion, said "eye" has the best seat in the house during sex. LOL!

On the basis of a long-standing (pun intended) convention that penises (penii?) have a single eye rather than a mouth, I would respectfully request you remove any reference to bleeding from your mouth, and reinstate the penis' right to sight.

As they say.... "You've gotta fight.... for the sight... to Paaaaaaaartay!"

OH... great writing. Thoroughly imaginative. You're totally weird, man!

Bill (WildWithWords)




 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
    Thank you for the compliment. I will stand by the mouth function, at least within this particular story. All this guy does is vomit shit up, depending on the fluid of the moment. I see it sucking or drooling, that is all (I guess I should call it he?) Thanks again.
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I guess that this proves the point that it is possible to write about just about anything. What a sad end for this brave little member, who had the misfortune to be attached to an absolute wanker.


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
    This is a great review. I vote for you in this contest. Thanks.
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A sad end to become fodder for a raccoon at the end of life stage for the poor penis. Ripped from his moring to end up in the trash.

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
    Things just keep getting worse, don't they? Thank you for your comments.

reply by country ranch writer on 19-Oct-2018
    smiles
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