Well...that was disturbing, but very well written. There is a reason why experts exist. Do not try dangerous stuff at home kids. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
Thank you (and sorry this has taken me so long to respond). This was a piece of terrible misery that is very vaguely based on a true story (certainly not from my own experiences). I was curious as I was writing it just where it might go.