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The Lonely Progress of Hunger


A family that had already fallen apart continues downward.

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hi there,

You may want to recheck the rules for this competition. It says a maximum word count of 300 and this clocks in at around the 600 mark. Significant editing is needed to meet the requirements.

All the best
GMG


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
    I like my story, unfortunately. I suspect I was never going to win anyway. I will let it stand. Thank you for letting me know. I did not notice the word count restriction.
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Well...that was disturbing, but very well written. There is a reason why experts exist. Do not try dangerous stuff at home kids. I wish you good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thank you (and sorry this has taken me so long to respond). This was a piece of terrible misery that is very vaguely based on a true story (certainly not from my own experiences). I was curious as I was writing it just where it might go.
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