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Bewitching Halloween


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Poems fun and scary

  26 total reviews 
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Ogden
 
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An appropriately scary Halloween poem.
I think that cat's probably p.o.'d because some witch of an owner made her wear that silly hat. You do know your cats, Marilyn.
Don


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Hi Don. How ARE you doing? I hope you're well and enjoying wonderful New York. Will take a peek into your portfolio. Thank you for your nice review. Marilyn (P.S. My Jewel, kitty, is absolutely gorgeous. She loves her hat.)
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I don't know the poem you referred to, but you did a wonderful job with this. I like the allusion to the 'car and mouse' game played out by prospective lovers. As always your perfection of craft is evident. Love this!


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
    Hi Beverly. Thank you so much for your nice review and fabulous rating. Marilyn

reply by Beverly Botelho on 24-Oct-2018
    You're welcome. The poem was magical. Bev.
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Marilyn, I love this very well written poem about Halloween with the lovely picture of your very beautiful and photogenic cat, Jewel. The words were very cute and the picture is adorable. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Hi Teri. Thank you so much for your review and the compliment on my Jewel. She's always with me when I write. She is a super cat, gorgeous, and smart. I know you know all about kitties. They are sweetness. Marilyn

reply by Teri7 on 22-Oct-2018
    She is so beautiful and looks so sweetly spoiled a bit! lol All of ours are too! love you my friend! Give Jewel a pet for me!

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    She is a beauty and I'm so happy to have her, Teri. Like yours, she was a rescue. I've had her 12 years. I don't know how long kitties can live, but I hope it's forever--or at least until I go. Yes, she gets lots of pats. Marilyn
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What a BEAUTIFUL little kitty!! She makes a delightful subject for this cute Halloween poem!! If you win..she gets treats!! Best of luck to you!! Loved this!!
Blessings...


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Hi Judy. Thank you so much for your nice review and compliments for Jewel. She's a honey. Marilyn

reply by Irish Rain on 22-Oct-2018
    She's just beautiful!!
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A great entry in this Halloween poetry contest Marilyn. This is certainly time of the year, we don't really celebrate it here. But beautifully written in unusual rhyming of abba in each stanza, good theme, well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Hi Roy. Thank you for your nice review. Damommy wrote one in this rhyme scheme as a quatrain and I liked it. Marilyn

reply by royowen on 22-Oct-2018
    Well done
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Haha, Jewel is indeed a most bewitching little ball of fur, Marilyn. What a lovely looking feline. She is every inch suited to the part for halloween. A most fun poem; not sure if you get to do the scaring little children thing (in a good way), but you and Jewel could have so much fun. The rhyme works well, nice job. Craig


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Hi Craig. Thank you. Jewel is always next to me when I'm on the computer. She's a lovely kitty. Smart (no kidding). Marilyn
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Gorgeous photo of your gorgeous Jewel and a cute poem as she awaits Halloween with her witches hat on an ready. Haven't read Yvonne's poem yet, but I will. Nice one Marilyn,
cheers,
valda


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Hi Valda. Thank you for your wonderful review and compliment on my Jewel who is such a doll. Marilyn
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I like the picture. All you can see is her eyes! Halloween is my least favorite day of the year now that I have no little kids. We live in an old neighborhood that gets few trick or treaters, so I just turn off the lights and listen to my dog/s barking for three hours.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Hi Phyllis. Thank you so much for your nice review. I read that Halloween is becoming the new favorite holiday. We see it a little here on FanStory where everyone makes such a big deal of it. Jewel is a wonderful kitty. I'm lucky to have her. I also turn off the lights on Halloween. Marilyn
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This is cute. "Merciless eyes of gold ensnare." Heck, my cat was black but her yere could set you trembling no matter what time of year it was LOL Great image.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
    I am LOL. Cats definitely control our minds. Thank you for your nice review. Marilyn
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What a great picture of Jewel Marilyn, she is indeed a gorgeous cat (give her a hug for me please). This was enjoyable to read and I liked the rhyme pattern. Good luck in the contest. Oh it was a great touch to have the background color match her eyes. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
    Hi Alie. Thank you for your super review. Jewel is right next to me, napping on the couch. I'll pass on your compliment to her when she wakes up. :) Marilyn

reply by aryr on 21-Oct-2018
    You are most welcome Marilyn & Jewel.
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