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Fairies & Mermaids


a little indulgence

  32 total reviews 
Comment by
Sam Frearson-Tubito
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Hi there, this is so wonderful. Thank you for sharing your story. Your little girl has a beautiful soul. I loved her story. What a great idea to interview her too and to give us the whole picture. Thanks again.


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
    Oh, my little one is hilarious. She's also a proper published author as well. Her school published a book of short stories and is available on amazon. She's awesome. G

reply by Sam Frearson-Tubito on 13-Jun-2019
    Wow. That is an amazing accomplishment at such a young age. So wonderful.
Comment by
F. Wehr3
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Georgia, you should be so proud of your story. It's wonderful. I'm a fantasy writer as well, and coincidentally, I'm from Georgia too! I loved your story about faries and mermaids.

Take care,
Russell


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Many thanks for this Russell. It made Georgia very happy. G
Comment by
Beck.fenton
 
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Delightful!
For Georgia Harriet Littlehales Gray
You have a wonderful gift of being able to tell a lovely story that made this reader very happy. I liked how the fairy could keep a secret. That is very hard to do!
I liked how the mermaid and her kingdom helped the fairies and their kingdom when there were a danger and disaster. That is what everyone should do!
Thank you for letting me read a very good story!


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Many thanks for the great response and indulging here. Lil G is very happy. G
Comment by
AngieDee
 
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Congratulations to Georgia for an outstanding story. I thoroughly enjoyed learning about your daughter and reading her story. She has a great writing style and imagination. I hope she keeps writing. Sincerely impressed!


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    She's something all right. Many thanks for the great response. Lil G enjoyed getting all the feedback. lol G
Comment by
Rickie1
 
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Georgia

You did a great job. I pictured the fairies all wet in the water and from the storm. The kind mermaids were good neighbors. I guess the story means even though you may be different you can still help each other out. I'm pleased to have read the work of a young author and am pleased to give 6 stars.

Keep writing.

Rickie


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Many thanks for the super feedback and support for the little one. She was over the moon. G
Comment by
Pam (respa)
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-This is wonderful to have written, G, and
if there were many, many more stars,
you would get them, Georgia.
-But what is most important is the
joy you are getting out of reading
and writing, and sharing it with
your father, so he can post it on Fan Story.
-I thought the interview was a very
creative idea, and helped us
to get to know you a little.
-I liked your story very much; you
should be very proud of it.
-I liked the topic of fairies and mermaids.
I liked the movie "The Little Mermaid," too.
-I like how your story begins with the two kingdoms.
-They are special places, and the
mermaids wanted it kept secret.
-It was nice that the fairies and
mermaids became friends.
-When the mermaids learned of
the storm, they helped the fairies,
but their help didn't stop there.
-They decided to work together to
repair the fairy kingdom, and were
going to be good friends after that.
-Thanks for sharing your story; I hope
you share another one on Fan Story.









 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Many thanks for the great response and notes for Georgia. She was so happy. G

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Oct-2018
    You are very welcome, G. It is nice to hear that Georgia was very happy. You both should be very proud. Did she like the picture I sent?

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Oh yes, very much lol

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Oct-2018
    That's great! 🙂
Comment by
rspoet
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Hello Gareth and Georgia,
What a great smile! The one without the beard, that is.
Although, dad looks pretty proud in the photograph.
And, what a marvelous story of the fairies and mermaids!
Hooray for Georgia! Well done!
As you know, I'm partial to the fairy world.
I like how the fairy kept her promise, and didn't tell.
Then the two kingdoms worked together to rebuild the fairy kingdom.
That's what it means to be best friends.
Six glittering stars that sprinkle fairy dust on someone named
Georgia Harriet Littlehales Gray!
Wonderful story,
Robert


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Many thanks Robert. She has a great imagination and this is her first story. She loved getting the responses. G
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tfawcus
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Dear Georgia,
The Jumblies! You're a girl after my own heart. My grandfather used to read that to me when I was your age, and it is still one of my favourites, along with The Quangle Wangle's Hat. I also thought what a sensible answer to your Daddy's question, when he asked what stories you find most interesting, and you said, "Probably stories I haven't read before". Being curious about new things is what reading is all about.

I enjoyed your story about the fairies and mermaids. I used to be a teacher, and have read hundreds of stories written by children of your age. I can honestly say that this one ranks among the best, and that is why I am awarding it six stars.

You have shown how important it is to keep your word when you have made a promise. Being able to trust someone is what makes friendship strong, and you show how special it is when the friendship between one mermaid and one fairy leads to the fairies being saved and their kingdom rebuilt.

I hope that you can persuade Daddy to publish more of your stories on FanStory.


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    many thanks again. this was Georgia's first proper written down story and it's been very exciting for her. She's so pleased with the reception it got. G
Comment by
krys123
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Cheers, Georgia;
> I was very pleased with your work and highly commendable for such a bright and challenge lady. You rose above it all and wrote this beautiful piece of work that I truly enjoyed.
>Such a diplomatic and heartwarming story of two kingdoms working together to solve one kingdoms problems. This compassionate and very love unconditional Theme Was very thought out in the context of your story was very clear. We should all get along and you did an excellent job, Georgia.
>Thank you very much, Mr. G And to you Georgia for helping me understand your writing and take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly, Georgia.
Alx


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Georgia was over the moon with the feedback and response to her story. I have a feeling I will be getting some more. lol

reply by krys123 on 25-Oct-2018
    That would be wonderful, Mr. G, and I'll support her 100%, as she is darling and should get a chance to voice her artistic venue, WITHOUT the father influence. Chuckle!😁
    Take care my friend.
    aAlx
Comment by
Sally Law
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  Rank:  6
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  Rank:  15
 

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Dear Miss Georgia,

I loved your story about the mermaids and the fairies! It was so smart of the mermaid to have oxygen tanks so everyone could breathe. I don't know if I would have thought of that. The idea was pure genius! To make new friends in new places is a wonderful blessing. I am glad the mermaids and the fairies will be friends forever and ever!

I hope you write some more with Daddy. I am already looking forward to it!

Your fan,
Sally


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    The oxygen thing threw me when she said it! I have no idea where she got that from. lol many thanks, she was so happy. G

reply by Sally Law on 25-Oct-2018
    You are both welcome! She is a very smart little girl!
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