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Silence.

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papa55mike

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What a beautiful poem and the picture is amazing. Sometimes it's silence I crave, in my mind and in my spirit, but we must speak out when necessary. Great job.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much.

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Hayley Zemontas

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I read your free verse a few times, and after reading your notes too I found it very clever and original how you personified 'silence'. This is really effective and powerful because it turns silence into a two faced human being who ended up ruining your friendship. I believe in honesty too and have also learnt over the years that not everyone who we think are loyal to us, actually are when it comes down to it. In times of trouble we learn who our true friends are and sometimes we have to walk away for our own well being. I'm glad you expressed your hurt through this poem. It was very evocative and inspiring x

Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much. Keeping quiet is ofen similar to accusing and not believing.Speaking out can clear the air.

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Really beautifully and eloquently expressed. You show us the deep hurt silence can cause. All human relationships are fragile and need to be regularly nurtured. Silence can be so easily misunderstood.

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much.

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Galactia

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Hi

Excellent written poem. I am assuming this has to do with her sinning and not confessing tp her partner. He finds out and they end up falling apart because he felt lied to?

Quite a sad poem.

Regards
Tia

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

No . There was a misunderstanding between two friends and and there was someone who could have cleared the air. but he didnt care. chose not to "interfere'.it was either a sadistic pleasure to let a(two) person suffer or monumental indifference.

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harmony13

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Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, sad and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the theme of this poem. Thank you for the
author's notes. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much.

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Judvan2

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Beautiful and very insightful. I like the way you used personification to show your point. Silence both good and bad depending on the situation, you explain this well and drive home the point. Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much.

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Karina21

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I love personification poetry, and in general, this is probably one of the best pieces I've seen on this site in a while. I was enchanted by your word choices. Your line spacing is unforced and meaningful. Excellent job, and definitely deserving of the six.

The retrospective appearance of Solitude was a very special moment in this piece. I am in love.

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you once again for this beautiful review.

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HELLO SANKU: Your posting here is extremely subtle. Your friend who didn't speak up when he should have... has gotten me feeling for you. I've tried to imagine the best way that I can respond with my condolences. I could think of only one effective way. I"m deeply spiritual too. So I looked in my Holy Bible at: ECCLESIASTES chapter 3: at verses 1 through 8. And while you're at it, Sanku take a focus on verse 7. Here's hoping that You'll find consolation in God's response. God bless you and yours, Sanku. Cordially" rhonnie69.

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much for your considerate review.

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Oh, the last stanza and line got me. Beautiful in thought as well delivery.
Sometimes a poem can travel over usual ground, then something elevates it athe right time, as here.
Great write.
Wishing you luck with it.
My best wishes.
RGstar

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much.

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This is a wonderful poem, well written. Silence to contemplate is welcomed. Silence when we need answers may not be. We look to others for support and may find it in their words. A fine entry for the contest. Marilyn

Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you very much.

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