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Silence.


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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about friendship that sometimes turn out that the one is betrayed by the other. The hurt goes very deep and we get relunctant to trust anyone again.


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
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This is a nice poem on and about silence in term of relation, attitude and behaviour; I liked and enjoyed the read; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018



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    Thank you very much.
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Congratulations on a great piece of work! I'm pretty introverted myself, so silence and solitude are both companions that I cherish. You're right though that sometimes they can be oppressive. I'd be very sad without the occasional company of family and friends!


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much once again.Thanks for the extra stars
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I like the way you have personified and twinned Silence and Solitude in the first half of this, before turning the situation to show another less attractive face of Silence. A nicely developed poem.


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
    THank you very much.
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I still have a few of these to give. I liked this poem very much,I don't how many time i felt the same way. but your poem and picture Ilana Miror let use was very touching to me


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much once again.I am thrilled with the extra star.
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It takes courage to be a friend sometimes, but a coward can be deceitful or as you put it, two faced. Beautifully written my friend, the language is articulte and strong. It's most expressive full of emotive words and extremely descriptive. Well done, good job, blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
    THank you very much.
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A wonderful personification of 'Silence' with an appropriate visual of a part visible face to match the duplicity of her character sketch. I like the way you portray her as a welcome companion on many occasions in many settings, even ironically when there was a natural acoustic element that 'silenced' the silence: 'On lonely mountains even with the chuckling brooks'. I love the depiction of remaining silent and being alone as creating perfect harmony: 'I loved her when she reigned with her friend Solitude. Grateful for the right perspective. The wisdom and the muse'. i.e. the enhanced ability of thinking clearly and logically whilst on one's own, in sharp contrast to when silence is broken, because of the perceived need to talk and to justify one's words and actions to others: 'Then I glimpsed her other face, a face of ruin. She is sin when words should be raised'. Also the fine examples of literary contradiction: ' She is empty but looms large...A paradox. With her, hearts speak to each other. Without words. Yet she can widen the rift when words run out'. Ultimately a two-faced creature. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes.


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.

reply by Impromptu Scribe on 05-Nov-2018
    You are very welcome :) Best wishes
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a very well expressed message, in free verse and a compelling random form. silence can be so easily misunderstood. great piece, Sanku...............meeshu

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    Thank you very much.
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