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To... My Mother-in-Law... Roz Malkin

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Cindy McIntyre
 
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Such a loving and beautiful tribute to your mother-in-law, Roz. Watching someone you love go through an illness is quite trying on the soul. "Soft eyes are quiet." What a heartfelt poem.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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A lovely Haiku. You read it by itself and it means one thing to you. Once you read the backstory, it takes on a whole new meaning. A beautiful poem for your mother-in-law.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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This is such beautiful haiku that makes one warm all over, just reading it. I'm sure she, too, is happy to have been such a loving force in your life.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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Coming to terms with reality, clearly has been a timely blessing for the family under difficult circumstances. Your poem, I'm sure, is a reassuring tribute to Roz.

Well done, Diana!

Don


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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This is a beautiful tribute to Roz. However it reads like a senryu Haiku is supposed to be about nature and the first and second lines should be grammatically connected.
However your third line is fantastic.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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What a beautiful, emotionally loving poem. Roz fought hard, and from the sounds of it, she won this battle. How can she not? With all the love that surrounded her during that hard time. A lovely picture to go with it. A joy to read! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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This is such an emotive poem. I felt how important this lady is to you and your family and your words exuded the strength and warmth that you feel when around her. I also love the last line 'fleeting fears stilled' because we all need those people who we just feel so comfortable with and feel calmer in their presence. They're like angels in the world, so I think your picture is extremely well chosen too. X


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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Hi Artasylum,

This poem has a presence in it that makes us feel good. I seen a guardian angel that sent you a message, that we can all receive. High level Haiku!

Peace be with you,
Urial


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


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This is such a heartwarming poem... thanks so much for sharing your heart and love . It is my honor to to get a glimpse and tender moment. thanks again. congratulations. Yours diana


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2018


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"Acceptance", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left.


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2018


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