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Unfortunately we all have these thoughts as death comes ever nearer for all of us, but we are in it together! Good luck with the contest, so much more behind these words than on first reading, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    very true.Thank you for reading and reviewing.
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"It's time now over", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Each line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
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This haiku is simply expressed and direct in theme. I like directness in everything I read. Beautifully described and illustrated. Great job and good luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
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HELLO SANKU: I like your work here. You show me a story that is interesting. It makes me go on thinking about it after I've finished reading it. It has much to offer to my imagery. I like poems like this one. Write more of these poems, Sanku. They're good. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much,i will try .only on some occasion you get these ideas.
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Good imagery projected here, i can even go as far as saying there is a touch of nostalgia about what is said, for poetic it is...and when one sees the reality within, it Brings realness into play.
Good write.
My best wishes.
RGstar


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very muh.
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Oh, yeah, the inevitability of death -- well stated in three short lines. A bit morbid, but so true: "soon my turn will come." Well written with a well-depicted picture.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


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    Thank you very much. Could'nt help it when two very close people are struggling for life.
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A very clever but introspective poem about the inevitable that comes to us all eventually. A great entry in this haiku poetry contest, Sanku, well done, good satori, good ld luck, well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


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    Thank you very much.

reply by royowen on 18-Nov-2018
    Well done
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Oh this is moving and meaningful poetry. In Fall leaves leave their branches... and, if I understand the thought, so does human life in due time.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
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I hope you don't gently float down when your time is up. May you be carried upward by the angels. This haiku is very good. You should do well in the contest.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    I don't know .We think it is going up. Thank you very much .With two family members in precarious stages of health (one is the same as me -62) I suppose I was a bit down in the dumps
    Thank you for your review especially for thinking it should do well .But i never win!
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this is not pessimistic or filled with any king of dread. instead it is very matter-of-fact and accepting. I can appreciate this sentiment. excellent Haiku, Sanku..................meeshu


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
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