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Contemplation by the pond
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haiku (the fading sun)


4-7-5 haiku

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rspoet
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This is an excellent haiku and entry for the contest
with imagery of the sunset and nice dual meaning
of the sunset of nature and lifespan
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Errrgghh. They made me change the ending. But I'll change it back AFTER the contest. Thanks so much. :))
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nassus1957
 
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I just love this, especially the figurative language employed in this poem. The choice of the metaphor and the exquisite choice of words made your poem leap from the page. An excellent write. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2018


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