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Waking to the Dream


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Cass Carlton
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This rating is just for you Michael. I don't know why or how you left us, but there will be a gap for some time before your place is taken by another. Thank you for your wisdom, your humor, and above all else your kindness. Goodbye Michael, I wish I had known you better. May your pen never be still. May the angels ply you with masterly plots, and may they all be best sellers. Until we meet again Adieu mon frere. Adieu. cheers Cass


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019


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Descriptive expression of wanting to be there within the poem context, Good Luck in the contest and hopefully getting there soon, a real running down the dream?


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


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Hi,

Very nicely done!

The image you've selected is a perfect compliment to your verse.

Nothing I can see here that would require revisions.

This is a great contest entry.

Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest!

Jan



 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


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This is really good. It's a dream that many of us have had. This poem causes one to think what it would be like to be such a person. I enjoyed reading this and the images it brings to mind. Very well done!


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


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Michael, You have your dream.We are standing in line. Your life is the blockbuster in which you wrote, produced, directed and starred. And in all of that, you mentored us as well. Take a bow, you deserve to. We are giving you a standing ovation.


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


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This story is frighteningly prophetic. Your FanStory friends have lined up around the block to pay tribute to you, our own FanStory superstar. I suspect you're watching all this unfold from your place in heaven. It looks like you got the best seat in the house after all.


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Yes, Mikey, some dreams are most definitely worth waiting for and waking up to.
Here's hoping that the dream you've awakened to provides you with the best seat in the house for all eternity.
I'll see you soon, brother.
Please, save a seat for me...
~Dean


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


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This is so sad, your dream revealed. You were one of the first writers that I noticed on the site. Your work was always so fresh and original. I wish to express my condolences to the family of Michael Cahill. Sadly missed.

Melvyn Lumb


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


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Oh Michael, you will be so missed here. Your story is fabulous, and I love it that your last post highlights your biggest dream coming true. In our hearts, you will always be a superstar.
Carol


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


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I just wanted to read one more from Michael's vast collection. this is a good one, short and sweet. not presumptuous. R.I.P., Michael...................meeshu


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


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