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I live to be amused. What a comical looking, dog-gone picture. Yep. Accuse the cat. That is a good alibi. He better watch the road, or he may run over a human Jay walking. Very witty. Good luck!



 Comment Written 13-Dec-2018


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This picture is one of my favorite. They are all on youtube, so fun. If the cat indicted in this poem finds out there will be trouble. Cats say "cats rule and dogs drool" This is a fun poem. It's clever that this was the cast of character you chose to drive your point home. I'm sure most others are dealing with humans for their subject matter.


 Comment Written 12-Dec-2018


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Cute 5-7-5 poem with animal theme. I counted the correct number of syllables. Good artwork choice. Wish I knew where they were going on their trip--doggy world? Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018


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I love this! I take it your a dog person. Anyways, this was very creative, as its shape was a bit different than the normal 5-7-5. Great job, and good luck!


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


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Dear Author. The poem is really cute... the picture is really cute... I'm just not too certain that they really coencide with eachother very well. I'm not really sure what the cat may or may not have had a hand on because there is no cat. So I'm confused. I get the father/son teachable moment thing... but not about the cat... it's just not available to the scene. The poem itself is really cute though.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    The older dog is teaching its son to blame whatever mischief they get into on the cat. That's all. :))
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Ah! to pass the bark I mean buck, what a wonderful picture you have chosen for this entry, Ma and Pa dog with the little one in the back, an excellent presentation, best wishes****kahpot


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this. Fun contest. Thanks a million. :))
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