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A ambitious woman is shown how wrong she has been

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This did help me catch up - thanks for posting this. I am looking forward to following this story. I really enjoyed the last one. Have a great day, my friend


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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
    Hi Douglas, I'm so pleased you've come back, it's just so nice to see you again. I'm glad this has been helpful, I've had some new readers over the last two weeks so I thought it might help to have a bit of background. I'll be posting the next part tomorrow sometime. Thanks for coming along with me. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra x
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I am loving your work Sandra, this is another excellent write from you and I have loved the story so far. You are very talented and bring the reader firmly into the story in an engaging and interesting way. Well done I look forward to reading more very kindest regards Meia xx


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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much, Meia. I'm glad you found this helpful. The next part will be out later tomorrow, :) xxx
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Hi Sandra,

Good call with this one. It should give people a gateway into the story so far. It's very useful as a remembrance for readers as well.

I did one of these for my novel a while ago. very worthwhile.

G


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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
    I realise that now. One reviewer has bookmarked it. Do you think my story is too complicated, or is it because each part is roughly a week apart and too long to remember it? I feel better now knowing you've done this. Thanks Gareth. xxx

reply by giraffmang on 19-Jan-2018
    No not at all. I fall right back into the swing of your story. it's more likely that people read too much. I only follow two or three novels so I can give them due attention.

    A week apart, not sure. Some folk only come on once or twice a week. There are some I only get reviews from once a week, but they'll review anything I've posted then.

    I tended to try to post twice a week, but my book twisted at every possible opportunity so I had to keep it close together. I used to update the previously section regularly at the beginning rather than include the specific ending of the previous instalment.

    I think yours is fine.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
    Thank you for that, Gareth. I'll try to post every 5 days, that'll mean posting the next part when the previous one has just finished. I appreciate your help, thanks so much. xxx

reply by giraffmang on 19-Jan-2018
    No problem :)
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Hi Sandra, it will help a lot of readers a lot. Now I've followed the story from day one, but I know this will help newcomers a lot. Very well done. Hugs. Ulla xxx


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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
    Thank you, Ulla, I'm hoping it will. :) xxxx
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That was helpful even for us who have been reading, since you post infrequently and we old folks have short memories.

Can anyone tell me how to put a link on further chapters to send a reviewer to this page?

Use the URL at the top of the page (use new version, not classic, since most do) and insert it where I've put dots. The quote marks cannot be the curled/formatted kind, so best to rtype them after copying the link.

CLICK HERE.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Phyllis, I'll have a go at that. Alexis Leech told me to ask you, and you did it before I had a chance! Are you a mind reader?? LOL. I'll come back to you if I still have a problem. Thanks my friend. xx
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Thank you for this , I was getting a little confused and plan to keep this to help me keep the story straight. I was getting John and Jacob confused

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
    I'm glad this was useful, it can get a little confusing so I'll add to it as I go along. Thanks Barb! xxx
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Aw, shucks. Let them read each chapter and keep up like some of us have. lol

You've given a very good description of the book, and it will certainly attract many readers. The first page will grab them, and pull them right into the story. 8-)


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
    Aw, thank you, Yvonne. I can't wait to read your review when you read the next part of book two. :)) You've encouraged me right the way through. Thanks, my friend. :) Sandra xx

reply by damommy on 18-Jan-2018
    Ooooo, sounds enticing. Can't wait.
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This was a great idea Sandra. Although I have followed each chapter, it was a fantastic review of the events. A wonderful reminder of how she went from one point in time to the next. Well done and very much enjoyed. Thanks.


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
    Thank you, Alie, I'm also going to write a synopsis of book two up to where I am now, as a few have asked me to. I'm hoping it will help, it's too complicated to put in one reply! lol. I do make life difficult sometimes, not only for Veronica. :)) Thanks, my friend. xxx

reply by aryr on 18-Jan-2018
    LOL, Sandra I prefer to think of it as making life challenging. You are so welcome and it is truly a great idea. And by separating the synopsis it creates a higher level of anticipation. (smile).
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Hi Sandra, I think this is great idea, as it will bring so much more readers up to scratch, and who can then follow your story without too much difficulty. Love from Spain. Ulla xxx


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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
    Thanks Ulla, I'm going to write a synopsis of book 2 up to where I am now, as a few have asked me to. I'm hoping it will help them with this plot. I bet Spain is a bit warmer than England at the moment. :( Sandra xx

reply by Ulla on 18-Jan-2018
    It is, we're up to 20degrees at midday and clear sunshine. All the almond trees are in flower. Beautiful!! Sorry to rub it in. Hugs x

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
    Somehow, you don't sound that sorry!!! LOL

reply by Ulla on 18-Jan-2018
    Hahaha, I know. I can't hide I'm enjoying it. xx
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I didn't miss a chapter of book one, but my two month absence and caused me to miss a huge chunk of book two. However, I am hoping that I might find a free day or two soon that I can catch up some of what I've missed. Thanks for sharing. :-)


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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
    I'm going to write a synopsis of book 2 up to where I am now, as a few have asked me to. I'm hoping it will help. Thank you, Ric. :) xx
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