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Magical Beasts


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A most delightful fantasy story. Imagine painting a merman and being pulled through the picture to his fantasy world. A giant squid is the point of evil. I hope you continue to write of these characters. You have already pointed out you don't think you have seen the last of the squid. Nice. Very nice. Good job.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Love your review. Thanks so much. Yes, there will be more of this story. Elaine
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Ms. Snyder
 
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If only I had read this on Sunday morning. This is amazing! I love the imagination and your world. I would like a merman of my own! I also found something extremely fascinating! My ex (whom I loved and adored) and who was a true artist had an idea that if he could perfect something artistically it would come to life. So when I read this I immediately came to the thought of his world and the concepts he had instilled into me at a young age that maybe the perfectionism that you have found in your mind has made this world possible. It is truly amazing! I love it and it is a VIRTUAL SIX! Thank you for sharing! Cheers, Fonda


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    I am honored by your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by Ms. Snyder on 08-Jan-2019
    Hi Elaine,
    The honor was all mine! Spectacular! Cheers, Fonda
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Artasylum
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Well... congratulations are due to you... You won and deserved to win this contest it was wonderful, magical, mystical and pleasing... thanks so much. looking forward. yours, diana


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much for the congrats and your great review. Elaine
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Fascinating - you leave the reader hanging at the end- very effective.
May I make an observation? In your first sentence, you say, "I admire my painting. His face returns my stare." You don't say whose face. It sounds like you mean the painting's, per se.
You have left the story open. Maybe this is chapter One?
At any rate, you seem to have won the hearts of your readers. Good job.
pome lover


 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thanks for a great review and your suggestion. I think more is on the way. Elaine
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Teresa Alford
 
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A thought that quickly came to me when I started reading your poem is how art is alive, how it is real! I like your story, you did a very good job in the telling! Write On! TA. ":-)


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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Interesting and arresting. I would be scared to fall into my art. So this is cool. But what if your Merman needed your art to withdraw ...pun intended...from the kraken. You left to paint him out of the scene...and it looked like you would be too late as the tentacle whipped into your earth life. Suddenly it looms over you...somehow kraken is here . Earth is doomed. How could a dashing dachshund riding merman save the day? Hmmmm
God bless


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    I almost fell off my bed when I read "dashing dachshund riding merman". It is an image I never thought of, the merman riding the dachshund. Thanks for reading and enjoying, you made my day. Elaine
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Your colorful world of sea creatures and the handsome merman remind me of the artwork of Lisa Frank... those vivid colors came to my mind as I read your delightful story. I know this will be a very strong contender in the Alternate Universe contest...

All the best,

Melissa


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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This is really interesting. There are times when I look at a beautiful picture and wish I could be there. Wouldn't that be amazing? I saw no errors. My only suggestion is the ending could be a little different. Instead of, 'I spend more time with my merman..' maybe something like, 'I stay a while longer..' Over all well done and I wish you well in the contest.


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
    I appreciate your suggestion, it fits much better than the line I wrote. I appreciate your encouraging words and positive review. Thanks so much. Elaine
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Terrific. Enjoyed this. Not a contest I would have ever entered, but than I never enter any of them! But glad you did. I like this, and though it is complete suggests more and maybe troubles keeping you from the realizations you have made, seen here.

Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    I am so honored! This is uncharted waters for me and my computer kept crashing while I was trying to write the story. Thanks so much for taking time to read and enjoy. I appreciate your encouraging review. Elaine
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