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Road-Ending


Am experimenting with the FanStory format options.

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Sugarray77
Melissa
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Your choice of the blank rock wall was confusing at first until I saw the cross... a clever option... I can see you are enjoying trying different forms of poetry. If you ever want to look at different forms..., shadowpoetry.com has a lot of examples...

melissa


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 27-Dec-2018
    Hi Suggaray,

    Thanks for your comment.

    Road-Ending was a test piece to try out the format function on FanStory.

    It then turned into a funny story by itself.

    Thanks for the shadowpoetry link. It has reminded me to get on a poetry writing course. It's a very challenging style of writing.

    Best wishes,

    Richard.
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rspoet
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Hello Richard,
You could spend a long time playing with the formatting.
If you're using advanced settings, there are more options, like symbols.
I liked the format reinforcing the content of the poem,
Cummings used this quite effectively.
Many a texter has fallen on hard times and rocks
Most will likely see the cross in the center cracks
but it is just to the right.
Excellent post/poem
RS





 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
    Thanks RS for the feedback.

    With FanStory we can have fun,
    if we can fathom the *riggin' formatting!
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