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Xmas Spirit


with blinders on ...

  4 total reviews 
Comment by
2019 Script Writer of the Year
Bill Schott
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  34 (+1)
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  11
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  12 (+1)
Script Rating
  Rank:  3
Review Stars
  Rank:  10
 

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This one-six-one, Xmas Spirit, has the syllables in the right place and points out our inability to perceive need and desperation that exists right in front of us.


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018


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C. Gale Burnett
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C. Gale Burnett
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  238
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I perfect 1-6-1 contest entry!
-Great message and insightfulness, meaning you are a good observer of human nature
-perfectly illustrated
-really great words for your rhyme choices
-love how you spaced out your words and lines; eye appealing and drawing attention to 'sneers' and 'cheers'
I wish you the very best in the contest; this is truly deserving :)
Gale


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018


Comment by
Pam (respa)
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  Rank:  24
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  23
Review Stars
  Rank:  31
 
Excellent
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-A good image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, and
you have the required rhyme.
-I like your opening word and
how you apply it to the poor,
who are being passed by.
-You take the second half
of the line and nicely relate
that to the last word choice.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018


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2019 Poet of the Year
Dolly'sPoems
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Poet Rating
  Rank:  2
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 Rank:  2
 

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A poignant write and there is often a big divide between the haves and have nots in society, with an ironic 'kerching' lurking in your words, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018


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