I perfect 1-6-1 contest entry!
-Great message and insightfulness, meaning you are a good observer of human nature
-really great words for your rhyme choices
-love how you spaced out your words and lines; eye appealing and drawing attention to 'sneers' and 'cheers'
I wish you the very best in the contest; this is truly deserving :)
-A good image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, and
you have the required rhyme.
-I like your opening word and
how you apply it to the poor,
who are being passed by.
-You take the second half
of the line and nicely relate
that to the last word choice.
-Good luck in the contest.