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Roses


a love poem

  29 total reviews 
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littlebit69
 
 
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Don't cover me in roses when I die. made me think about what my mama said. Don't bring me flowers when she's dead because she can't smell them. I enjoyed reading your poem


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Well thank you so much, so kind of you!!
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dragonpoet
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This seems to be a love poem from a woman who has died and is saying decorating her grave will never show how much they loved and she believes that he will forget their love in time. If they loved so much, she should believe in eternal love.

Congrats for placing second in the contest.

Keep writing

Joan


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
    Thank you for the congrats and the lovely review Miss Joan!!

reply by dragonpoet on 07-Jan-2019
    No problem, Irish.

    Joan
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A gorgeous and perfect write, Miss Irish. Each word carefully plucked by you to present the idea that while roses can be lovely, not so much so if the author doesn't care for them.

Metre perfect, rhyme perfect with fine seasoning of humour, passion and love.

I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Again, thank you so much Miss Gloria!!
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C. Gale Burnett
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Irish Rain, you are an inspiration. This is truly beautiful!
-love the black background, complementing both the artwork and your poem
-love the font color
-love the rhyme
-every verse in this poem was poetic bliss!
Thank you for sharing!!
Blessings,
Gale


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
    Oh, thank you so much Miss Gale!!
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Susanjohn
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and here it is! Girl you can write like no other! You imagery, wording, rhymes, flow etc... WOW and super WOW! Good luck in the contest Judy...this is sooooo dang good!


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
    I am so grateful..thank you Miss Susan!!
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Ronni
 
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Hello Irish Rain!
An eerie, surreal echo wafts in tremulous haunting this soul searing kind
of 'last will and testament' by this tormented loved one; while in a combined
eulogy and epitaph of last wishes and desired remembrance, pleas for
no roses, candles; but rather an anticipation of celebrating their true love
in the ever after. Captivating tone and presentation tilts the senses in ever
gripping depths of reflection and redemption! Awesome write! Best of
luck in contest!
Love, blessings, Ronni


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
    Again, thank you so much lovely lady!!
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Irish Rain
Smiles at your rhyming poem of what not to bury you with no flowers and no candles.
I love how you ended you poem
besides I don't like roses.
Happy New year and I wish you the best in this contest. Gert


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much Miss Gert...a lovely review!!

reply by Gert sherwood on 01-Jan-2019
    You are welcome Irish Rain Gert
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l.raven
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Hi Judy, WOW !!!!...my sweet friend...this is truly one of your best...but I have to say...roses are my favorite...so bring them on...even if we weren't friends...LOL...LOL...truly Judy this beautifully worded sweet girl...let Lilac bloom to Lavender goodbye...I love your rhyming poem you...and love this picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Again...thank you so much Miss Linda!!

reply by l.raven on 31-Dec-2018
    again....you my sweet friend are alwaysssssss sooooo welcome...your a sweetheart...love you...xxoo
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Outstanding poetry. True artistry. I rarely look at the poets name. I'm all about the expression in a poem and you nailed this aspect.
I love your passion for roses, haha, as you seemlessly guide thru these lines.
Your skill is effortless. I admire your mastery. This deserves to be in a small gorgeous poem book decked out in flowers. Well done!!


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Thank you so much again JanPerry!!!
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Teri7
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Teresa Shortess
 
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This is a very well written rhyming poem about the roses and how they were not your favorite flower anyway. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Thank you so much Miss Teri!!
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