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A brief stop on the way


Newly weds need something together

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Bill Schott
 
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This senryu about a recent marriage, A Brief Stop on the Way, has a 5-7-5 format and leaves me with the phrase 'toad in the hole' (sausages cooked in Yorkshire pudding). I have learned something today and it's not even noon.


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Hi Bill,

    Thanks for your review.

    Best wishes,
    Richard.
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Y. M. Roger
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How fun! A traditional Scottish dish at a roadside stop -- a great memory for the couple and a great meal to get them through their evening together!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) ;)


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    Thanks for your review.

    Just found out that O.W.Toad Ltd does the copyright for Margaret Atwood.

    So toad was on my mind as I wrote this poem.

    On another day I may tell of what happened on their first evening as a wed couple,
    if you insist.

    On another topic entirely, am writing a serialised romantic comedy at present that will give the toad couple some ideas about what to do.

    Am about to do chapter 3.

    [That must be what FanStory call a "pump"! ]

    Thanks.
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I was recently married. This is my second marriage and my new wife's third. She says, "A third time's a charm". So far, she's been right. Really am looking forward to spending the rest of my life with her. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018
    Congratulations on your second marriage!

    Thanks for your review.

    Me, I'm interested in writing romance / humour and am doing a serialised story on FanStory at the moment.

    Great fun.

reply by victor 66 on 31-Dec-2018
    Thank you. And you are most welcome. Happy New Year!

reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Thanks and best wishes in everything you do.
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