Good evening, Jason, I thought your poem, The Ghosts in My Head, to be very interesting indeed. I liked the imagery you used and the way you pulled the past into your present. You lost your meter toward the end though, in the second to the last stanza. We all have those people in our past that stand out to us for one reason or another. Some we wish we had kept in touch with and some we wish would jump off the proverbial cliff... lol Nicely said.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for catching the meter. Happy New Year's!