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The Ghosts In My Head


Old friends and old memories

  3 total reviews 
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Rachelle Allen
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This is hauntingly beautiful, Jason, and right on target. I read it several times and liked it more with each pass. It is memorable for all the right reasons.


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
    Thank you for the very kind review, Rachelle. Cheers and happy writing!
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susand3022
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Good evening, Jason, I thought your poem, The Ghosts in My Head, to be very interesting indeed. I liked the imagery you used and the way you pulled the past into your present. You lost your meter toward the end though, in the second to the last stanza. We all have those people in our past that stand out to us for one reason or another. Some we wish we had kept in touch with and some we wish would jump off the proverbial cliff... lol Nicely said.


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for catching the meter. Happy New Year's!
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Janice Canerdy
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This is a touching, hauntingly beautiful poem that SO resonates
with me--line for line. I have the same thoughts about my friends
of childhood AND adulthood. How we drift apart . . .


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018



reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Thank you. I'm glad it touched you. Happy New Year's!
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