Love can be quite splendid but not if one has to battle mace and get a disfigured face. :) Your sense of humor is enjoyed. Desire is a tricky...it requires better timing. :) Great luck to you in the contest. What a fun entry.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
Thanks for your great review. My writing discloses my inner struggle, that's why it often looks a bit odd.