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The pain of being human.

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Cindy McIntyre
 
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Love can be quite splendid but not if one has to battle mace and get a disfigured face. :) Your sense of humor is enjoyed. Desire is a tricky...it requires better timing. :) Great luck to you in the contest. What a fun entry.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
    Thanks for your great review. My writing discloses my inner struggle, that's why it often looks a bit odd.
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Artasylum
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I think you made the right decision... nobody wants to be maced and I love your humor here. love the image and I'm looking forward to more from you... Yours, Diana


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
    Dear Diana,
    My poem was a bit of fun, a true word spoken in jest.
    As writers we keep our wit or die.
    Thanks,
    Richard.

    PS What I like most in a novel or poem...you cannot be sure if the author
    is reliable or being deliberately unreliable.
    If the latter, it's for dramatic effect!
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