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Time's Fly By...


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  38 total reviews 
Comment by
evesayshi
 
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In my opinion, a lovely and smooth free verse, defining love in easy and lyric flow - in full compliance with the prompt - the total presentation is striking and artfully rendered. Best of luck in the contest...


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
    Hey everayshi... I've been gone a while and so happy to be back with my Fanstory peeps...Yours, diana

reply by evesayshi on 07-Jan-2019
    Welcome Back, Diana - I thought you were away, not seeing your poems for awhile. Very happy to read you again...Eve
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Frank Colabella
 
 
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This is a nice love poem, but the rhythm is a bit awkward. The imagery is nice and the personification of time contributes to the effect of immortal love. Overall, the sentiment is beautiful, but the meter can use some fine-tuning.


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    thanks frank
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Jmf4119
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I enjoyed reading your very well written love poem, "Time's Fly By". You speak in very understandable language that is heartfelt and a joy to read.

Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much Jmf4119... thanks so much for reviewing today... so very much appreciated... yours, diana
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dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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writing on
 
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This is a simple and beautiful love poem. It says it all in just a few lines. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Hey ... thanks so much for reading writing and looking forward to sharing words in 20019
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Earl Corp
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This poem speaks directly to me about the love I share with my wife, Anna. I'm not a free verse fan but as I said this poem spoke to me. It hits three of the four criteria I use to rate poetry on. It makes sense, it invokes emotions within the reader, and it made me feel good.


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Hey ... thanks so much for reading writing and looking forward to sharing words in 20019
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Insider98
 
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Though unrhymed, this piece is just great! You describe your feelings and emotions perfectly about your love for one another. Excellent job! I wish you good luck!
Insider98


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Hey ... thanks so much for reading writing and looking forward to sharing words in 20019
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babykoala
 
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I love the feeling of love and comfort this poem resonates. I myself have a partner that does exactly this for me, keeps away my crazy! I love that line. So I completely relate to the words in this piece and it made me smile.


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Well I'm happy that like me you are blessed with a wonderful partner... happy new year... yours, diana
Comment by
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Bill Schott
 
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This love poem, Times Fly By, makes an energetic statement about loving a person through the thick and thin already seen, and the days that are yet to come. Nice.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    thanks so much for stopping by my shop and reading!
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A. Willow Bends
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Wendy
 
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A beautiful tribute to your loved one. This is not crazy form. This is love expressed in a unique and essential, poetic form. I love the symbol as your visual. The overall effect is stunning and wonderful. I have a someone such as this in my life, so I can relate to this poem deeply. We are the lucky ones. You convey joy in a most meaningful form here and it was a pleasure to read what you have produced. Excellent! I am out of sixes. My apologies.
Good Luck! Super job!
Wendy


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
    Thanks you so much A. Willow Bends for this touching and sage review... yay... so happy to see you I've been away and have missed my fanstory peeps... 2019 full steam ahead! Yours, diana
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Miss Sherry
 
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Beautiful artwork to accompany this very sweet love poem. Love the line, "your love is my home" - that is the true essence of love...where you feel you belong. Nice poetry!!


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Hey ... thanks so much for reading writing and looking forward to sharing words in 20019
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