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Our Dance


free verse

  4 total reviews 
Comment by
Liz O'Neill
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This is lovely. The imagery is rich. The reader can be drawn in to received encourage to dance their dance and live to dance it again, even dipping a bit. This is very poignant. Nicely written. Congratulations on your win.


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


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nordicgirl
 
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Oh, my, my. This is so lovely. How beautiful that love overcomes everything including age. Damn straight, who gives a Damn what anyone thinks? I adore this. A real beauty. NG


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


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phill doran
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Hello Anon
A clever use of the words provided - I saw the prompt and could not for the life of me think how 'dipper' could be poetically used aside from a reference to the Big Dipper, so I upped your standing for being creative with that one word alone.
But aside from the compulsory wording, the narrative is excellent and the final dismount is a fitting tail to the tale.
My one reservation is 'whoosh' - but I think that is a matter of personal preference and I have not let that bear on my consideration of the piece.
A great write in a limited frame and in a limited time.
You must do well with this.
cheers
phill


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
    Whoosh kind of grew on me after looking at it for a while. LOL What a great review. Most appreciated. Thanks so much!
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Susanjohn
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Awww so lovely! In fact, for a moment I forgot that you HAD to use certain words! The flow is easy peasy smooth and easy you free verse king! I love the feel of this poem or maybe the thought that this kinda love is posssible. :-) Nice job Mikey, I enjoyed reading this. Happy new Year to you! ( write more romantic mushy stuff ;-)


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
    How do ya know it's mikey? LOL

    In any case, thanks a million. You got this perfectly. :))

reply by Susanjohn on 06-Jan-2019
    ....yes, I forgot about it being a contest. I haven't been here much lately..so I just started going to all my friends profiles and started review.. Though, i STILL would know you! ;-)
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