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Until We Meet Again


Beautiful Friend...

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Hugh McDowell
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Diana, so sorry to hear about your friend's passing. Your poem is a powerful, poignant tribute. The second line is premium! Really resonates. Cherish the great memories. Take care. Hugh


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A touching piece, so much emotion in three lines. 'You live in my heart' - hold on to that precious thought. I am so sorry for your loss, but it finds beauty in these words.


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It's difficult to lose someone you are close to and have so many memories of. It's even more difficult to express it in a concise poem. You did it very well. That's a phone call that nobody wants to get. Cowboy


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Sad to hear of your friends passing - but a poem from the heart shows the respect and love you shared for that person - a writing from the heart is the best gift a person can share - respectfully Ron


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The consonance of hurt/heart here is what makes this 5-7-5 stick in my mind. Although denied by many within FanStory consonance, this matching of consonant sounds regardless of the absence of a like vowel sound is a form of slant rhyme that is generally accepted among the poetic fraternity that write in the English language. It is good to see it exemplified here.


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Ah, this is very touching. It is beautifully illustrated. This is a very relatable poem. Thank you for your creativity and sharing this poem. Very well done! Write on! TA ";-)


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So sorry for your loss. This sentiment is beautiful. I know what it is like to lose friends, lovers, and family. I can only say that I hope you have support around you in the days and weeks to come. Very heartfelt poem for the 5-7-5 contest. Good luck.


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A beautiful poem, of love never dying, yet walked away. Few words say, you thought of a love today, you might have finished. . A beautiful poem, of a heartache.


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This 5-7-5 says a lot. I can really relate to it and the people we love do continue to live in our hearts. I believe it! Awesome presentation. Well done. Wishing you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2019


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"Until We Meet Again", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Between each line of this talented poet's work are woven the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.


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