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Clean Burning Coal

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This one-scene script, Clean Burning Coal, is almost too real to be classified as satire. Trump bringing out the KKK seems on point, and his standing with the African-American community is probably not the great. Enjoyed this one.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2019


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The beginning of Trump being on stagr reeminds me of the Wizard of Oz, "Ignore the man behind the curtain." You were able to fold several Trump issues into your script. He's raping the environment, he's racist, and he lies.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


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Hello Anon
Well - I should review the work as a work: the content hould not to colour my view either for or against.
As a script, this is very good. The dialogue works and with a few light strokes you have created a 'scene' - I know where we are, who is there and the sort of atmosphere, the crowded room etc. Pressure cooker stuff. And one scene would do - beginning, middle and end.
So, yes, provided reviewers do their job and consider form over content, you should do very well with this.
Very compact: well done.
cheers
phill


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


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