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William Ross
 
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This is great written really well, Great rhyming and wonderful meter, reads and flows very good.I remember the first time with a rose bush. Good luck and have great day


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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That was a long time ago. Life isn't half as much fun for youngsters of today. I enjoyed your lovely poem, I was a tomboy too, good days weren't they? I think you've written a really good contest entry, it certainly brought back many memories for me. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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kahpot
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Excellent, the wonders of new and different things to explore, while the pain of some of it we discovered later in life, a wonderful poem that reads and flows very well, best wishes for your contest****kahpot


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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Miss Sherry
 
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There is nothing like the curiosity and joy of a child. This is such a sweet write. I have seen children wanting to touch and explore this way. The artwork is adorable. You have done a fine job of entertaining us.


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana

reply by Miss Sherry on 11-Jan-2019
    My pleasure!!
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dragonpoet
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This does remind me of being young. Everything was so exiting and new. I like the way the second lines of succeeding couplets rhyme. Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Jan-2019
    No problem, Diana

    Joan
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A fantastic opening where a single word and a phrase tells us you're talking about a toddler.: waddled and "this side of brand new" The last line wowed me with its universal message. Most impressive.


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    Hey Spitfire... thanks so, so much for reading and blanketing me with stars... also thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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A sweet picture to compliment your poem about When Life Was Still Fun.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with a moral to the story as well.

Blessings
Janet


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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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akey
 
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A very sweet poem about the new morning thru the child' eyes.
This made me think of my grandmother ( Nanny) her yard was always beautiful.
The rhyming was perfect. I did not get "were such a quick retreat" until I reread it.
Great job and I loved the picture.


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royowen
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An excellent work in non-rhyming couplets. The message ofbthevwork is subtle, but year still clear. I always made sure my kids enjoyed their childhood, that the "thorns of life" came when they could handle them, and, although it's a guessing game, a haven for little ones is always important. Beautifully written in great language, good luck, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana

reply by royowen on 11-Jan-2019
    Well done
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Bill Schott
 
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This poem, I've Arrived, finds the young explorer dodging a bullet as her hand full of thorns was postponed until some later introduction. Nice.


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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