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This sounds so lovely and cute! Playing around with flowers and grass and bugs. You create some amazing pictures in my head. Excellent job! I wish you good luck!
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thanks ever so... Insider... I thing you are a new face in my shop and I appreciate your thoughts kiddo.
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I enjoyed reading this. I have so few memories of my childhood but I do know I was quite the tomboy for years.
No errors that I could see.
All the best,
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the Julu series)


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    I think the exercise here Janilou is to try and tap into the soft, innocent part of us and that is so hard but fun too.
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Beautiful colour and images; a sense of exploration and joy at the encounter with a garden and its inhabitants. The last line is unexpected but that is part of the poem's uniqueness. I enjoyed it


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    Hey Konka... Thanks kiddo for your review...
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I love the springtime and when flowers bloom. I have come to love it even more now that I have a child and they are experiencing that discovery of life and you get to experience it with them. I enjoy reading the descriptiveness of the world around in your poem. One becomes a part of the experience, not just a reader. Well done and good luck


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    Me Too... can't wait till roses bloom and their thorns attack... yours,
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This is a creative and well-written poem. The artwork is perfect for the subject of your writing. We all have different memories of our early years. I wish you the best of luck in the competition.


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    hey pretty thank so much kiddo for your review. yours,
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Reading this is as sweet as you describe the fragrances of that garden to be! It was easily understandable and I think at some points that lead to it feeling more story-like than poem-like, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep up the great work :)

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    Hey abby
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Very well done. I think I would have sixed it if I had any. I do not. You're not quite in that child, don't have the child's eye quite down, it seems -- maybe that's the sophisticated verse? But very close I think. I grabbed a muskrat once when I was little because I wanted to touch the shiny fur. The muskrat didn't like that. A mean bite on my thumb is what I got.

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Hey Thanks for your sage and thoughtful review. yours, diana
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