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Life is Surviving Living


We must be strong to live life.

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dragonpoet
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Sounds like this person has had a lot of bad happen but still fights and finds a way for herself and her family to survive.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
P S I checked out your website. I think you should use your real name and not your screen name on the website for at least the book section. Maybe let them know to find your writing on fanstory.com so they can see it for themselves.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thanks for advice. Did you support me by purchasing anything?

reply by dragonpoet on 14-Mar-2021
    You're welcome.

reply by dragonpoet on 14-Mar-2021
    You're welcome.
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victortouche
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Yup.
I quite agree.
Life was not meant to be
measured by happiness parameters.

Yet, we all do the comparisons.
My right hemisphere of the brain
was only let loose after years
of emotional suffering.

Quite a reward though.

I am getting a bit tired
of getting back up after
being knocked down tho.

LOL

victortouche


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Hi Victor! Thanks so much stopping by. liberty justice
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Liz O'Neill
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This reminds me of Chumbawamba's song We Get Knocked Down. Both that song and this poem have messages of encouragement in difficult times. It's not so much, "I believe you can do it" but rather, get back and do it. The reader will relate because you are telling some part of their story. Well written.


 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
    So true. Thanks for lovely stars.
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" the meaning of life is loving living".... I really like this. This poem is very meaningful and makes you think, which is something that all good poems should do.


 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thanks dear poet and to all the people who voted for me. Read more of my writings. liberty justice
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Ima L. Ami
 
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Life is definitely full of ups and downs, and it seems to punch you square in the face when you can least handle it and expect it even less. Unfortunately, there is only one option to not living--and I'm not ready to choose that option just yet! Great work, and thanks for sharing this poem.


 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much great comments. Read more of mine. liberty justice

reply by Ima L. Ami on 20-Jan-2019
    You're very welcome, and I sure will!

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much for lovely comments. Contest ended. Read more. liberty justice
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I enjoyed your life struggle here and how life can throw us hard balls which we either drop or catch, but we carryon regardless, 'that's life' as the saying goes, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much Dolly and read more of my writings. liberty justice
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This speaks vividly life means survival living, paying the price, facing pain and never quit living, keeping faith in God; well said, well done. Publish works that's readable 4,000 years -- DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thanks dear poet and to everyone who voted for me. liberty justice
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Your poem expresses a strong spirit, old-fashioned chutzpah, and determination in the face of adversity. All citizens had that spirit in past generations, now it is a rare quality. I commend you for it. Good luck in the contest with this fine post. Marilyn


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Thank you Beas and to all who voted for me. Read more of my writings. liberty justice


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Kudos!! You are facing life bravely regardless of your circumstances. Just when we think things will be fine, some obstacle comes long and throws us for a loop. When we can jump right up and try again, we are winners in the game of life. Very nice poetry.


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
    Thanks so very much.
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Excellent concept and Well thought out visually picturesque verses. Life is living the life we are giving with faith, hope, dreams to succeed and improve our lot in life and giving thanks, praise, and our needs to our Lord and Savior,
To build our Faith.
God's Blessings to you and your family for sharing.


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much, dear poet, for the lovely comments and brilliant stars! I just added a picture.
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