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If you love someone, set him free.


I set my little night hawks free.

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dragonpoet
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Well told story that fits the contest well.
For a while, it seems, you surely had a knack for picking the wrong guy. Gifts shouldn't keep you with someone. It is buying your love. It is fine to be alone. The right man is for you is out there somewhere.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and keep searching.

Joan


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thanks lovely stars. Yeah somewhere Joan but I'm so tired of looking.lolol liberty justice

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Oct-2019
    You're welcome. Maybe if you stop looking he will find you.
    Joan
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I like it very much and I think I will sit here
and read more of witch you have written
thanks for the vote on my Lou Gehrigs disease


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
    HI ABBY. Is this true story, like I asked you in my review and what causes this. Did you win 1st place? My thumbs up first launched you into 1st place {by yourself} so you could get the entire 1st place price {by yourself}. I won 1st place in this poem. lolol liberty justice

reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 30-Jan-2019
    no I had to split a 3rd place with the others the one that got 2cnd place didn't even follow the rules
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This is an interesting write based on the quote. I agree, set them free and if they come back... There are those who we must not take back under any circumstances and you covered that, too. As women, it's important to respect ourselves even if it means letting them go. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
    You are so right, Beas and I think I won 3rd place on this poem. Did you give me your thumbs up in contest that just ended? lolol liberty justice
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Phyllis Stewart
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Good message and well written. Second chances are okay, but not third, fourth, and fifth. Some people will never change, and it's foolish to think you can do the impossible. Men will say anything to keep you hanging on, but it's what they DO that matters.


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thanks for lovely stars and sympathetic comments. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest today.
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Dear Mystery Author,

Good for you! Those kinds of guys can spot any kind of weakness from a thousand miles away. And for them, kindness and love are weaknesses. It's really sad. They are the ones who are broken. Not us. Good luck in the voting!


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much for these lovely stars and your support and wishing me Good Luck in contest and in life.
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Very well said. Sometimes it's just best to set them free. If the love is meant to be, they'll return a changed person. If not, well then it's not meant to be. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    Thanks, dear poet, for those lovely bright stars and your sympathetic or empathetic review comments. Thanks for wishing me good luck in the contest.

reply by TheStoryMan on 26-Jan-2019
    You're welcome.
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C. Gale Burnett
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Well, well done :) Sadly entertaining. Sad because I feel your pain; entertaining because of the humor you expressed within your story and comments.
You are very gifted in your writing! Thank you for sharing! Glad I found you here on FanStory.
Gale


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    You are so sweet and thank you so much for supporting and appreciating my works. I will be reading lots more of your works, also.
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Miranda Langston
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this is an excellent story and except for the capitalization of the word Unforgettable, there were no SPAGs that i noticed. very well written and i'm glad you set them free because you deserve better


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    Thanks, dear poet, for those lovely bright stars and your sympathetic or empathetic review comments.
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You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, I hope you find the joy the 'right' one can bring..



 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    Thanks, dear poet, for those lovely bright stars and your sympathetic or empathetic review comments. Thanks for wishing me good luck in the contest. No Bette Sue grew out of her wild child ways and went to college got a career.
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Dolly'sPoems
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I loved your sentiments here, you cannot make someone love you and you might as well allow them to be free, if they come back to you, they will stay forever, if they don't then you are better off without them, wise words, lovee Dolly x


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    Thanks, dear poet, for those lovely bright stars and your sympathetic or empathetic review comments. Thanks for wishing me good luck in the contest. No Bette Sue grew out of her wild child ways and went to college got a career.
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