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wonderful. I love this one. You muse has taken off to Paris for a vacation. :) I often wonder where my muse takes off to and I don't even get a text. I think she travels the world or just takes off to a secret place for weeks and months at a time. *sigh* Oh! well. I think I will find another muse, a second one. for back up.


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What soulful eyes and such a quizzical look! And what a fascinating segue into your theme of missing someone who's having a good time in Paris! Best wishes in the contest- Joan


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This is very clever and funny. I think you mean singular Text, not texts. You describe the sadness of being apart. With the other person in Paris, not less. Your syllable count meets the requirements. Best of luck in the contest. judi


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019


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So you're in Paris? Is that where you are now, Diana? Thanks for sharing your humorous 3 Liner. And hope that all is going well for you and you'll give us more details.


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Well, when my muse is absent, I do hope she's having a good time elsewhere. Maybe fro Paris. Best of luck in the contest with this cute entry. Marilyn


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019


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How funny, Diana! :) Either you're really missng for the elusive (and, obviously, tech-saavy!) muse or he's got you in one of your really fun moods...either way, you've done a great job with the 3-line offering! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette


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So clever. Love the imagery and feeling your words evoke. Quite and adorable photo to go along with the playfulness of your words.


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Yep that's the way it goes we are sad they have gone but thehaveother things on their mind to worry about us while they are gone texting don't seem to cut it.


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Ah, the fickle muse. Always in Paris, or Jakarta, or Rio when most in demand.
Making a monkey out of me!

Do you need the apostrophe in 'text's'?

Well done.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019


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He he he, well Paris isn't a bad place to start the muse working again, I enjoyed your 3 liner and I wish you luck with it, good to see you again, best wishes, love Dolly x

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