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A fine work and contender for the Dribble Flash Fiction. Not a word was wasted in this ultra-short piece. Whew! The black and white art was perfect, Bob. Gotta give ya a sixer.
All my best,
Sal :+)


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Aww. Thanks so much, Sal. I am so happy that you thought this piece was worthwhile and worthy of six stars. Wow! . :) Bob
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I've often heard it said that the first step to realizing you have a problem with addiction is to admit you have a problem with addiction.
Apparently, Clyde hasn't come to grips with his just yet.
It doesn't sound as if he is going to any time soon, either.
Que sera, sera.
Good luck to you in the contest, Bob.
~DeanO


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much, Buddy. I appreciate your review of this small one. Bob

reply by Dean Kuch on 28-Jan-2019
    You bet.
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Yeah, Clyde, of course you can. Isn't that what most alchoholics say to themselves? This is a thought provoking read for so few words. It creates strong imagery


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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Doug. I appreciate your review. Bob
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Short and sweet. Maybe this is leading on to another novel of your making. No spags and got us all keen to see where it goes. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Geoff. I appreciate your time here. Bob
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It sounds like this person almost drank himself to death. Yet he still takes another sip. This, sadly, seems to be a truth for alcoholics. As is the fact that they believe they can stop drinking any time.

Good luck and keep writing

Joan


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Joan. I appreciate this. Bob

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Jan-2019
    Any time, Bob.

    Joan
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To begin with, I love the artwork on this one. Very noir - very evocative. The you get deep into the psyche of the alcoholic who is "passively" committing suicide - almost surprised that they're not dead yet, in one breath, while assuring themselves that they're just one easy decision away from sobriety.

Great contest entry.

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much, Mark. It has been ages since I got into any contests, I think. (Maybe one time) LOL Bob
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Alcoholics always think they are in control but of course they are not and this denial ensures the cycle continues, a poignant write Bob and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Dolly. Yes, they always think they can stop. :) Bob
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