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Rubbish...


6 word poem

  63 total reviews 
Comment by
Raul1
JOSE CONDE
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Very good showing in a six words poetry. It is very easy to read and understand your poem. Thanks for sharing! Congratulations! I like how it is structured.


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Thank you Raul :)

    Very nice of you to review this poem as I know it doesn't pay out now.

    Means a lot.

    Thank you :)

reply by Raul1 on 17-Feb-2019
    You're welcome!
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Poetic Friend
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Wow, you spoke volumes about the man polluting the ocean in such few words, endangering the lives of oceanic species.

This poem certainly deserves a placing in this contest. It is memorable and profound. Congratulations!


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Thank you very much, Poetic friend.

    Pleased you engaged with this wee poem :)

    much love

    tracey
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rama devi
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Congrats on your honorable mention in this contest, dear Tracey. This is highly relevant. Such a sad state of things in our oceans, dear coral reefs, endangered species, etc.

Thanks for voicing it so skillfully. Bravo. The poetic contrast is most effective.

Warmly, rd


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much, rd. I've never been mentioned before. I feel very honoured :)

    Glad you enjoyed

    kind regards

    tracey

reply by rama devi on 19-Feb-2019
    :-))))

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
    :)
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Kerry Robinson
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Hello there, this is a lovely six-word entry. It's so sad to see the oceans get polluted;
We not only use these oceans as natural resources. But, Marine habitat has the most diversity of life; it's really quite incredible. ~Kerry


 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Thank you, Kerry :)

reply by Kerry Robinson on 08-Feb-2019
    You're very welcome. Enjoy your weekend!
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Rickie1
 
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Tracy

Everything flows to the ocean the birth nest of all life and we are crapping in our nursery. We wouldn't raise our children in rubbish. Your poem speaks to use to care for mother earth so she can birth many more generations.

Rickie


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Thank you
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Bichon
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Aww, a sad but true poem. We are flooding our precious oceans with filth and rubbish, endangering their lives. Thank you for highlighting this issue in your poem.


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Thank you
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Donka Kristeva
 
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Excellent thought expressed in this very short poem. The message is clear and powerful. Great use of words. Best wishes in the contest


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Thank you
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello trimple
I believe what you are saying with all the Rubbish being dumped into the oceans and seas are the cause of suffocating the life that once as you said was teeming will soon or later kill the life of the deep waters Gert


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Thank you
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Winslow
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Dear Trimble,

It always seems to me that man can't foresee the negative impact that a wonder material may have on the future. One thing touted about plastic when it was introduced was it was indestructible. Now we are having to deal with it. Pretty soon plastic will outnumber the fish in the oceans. Who could have guessed?

Warm regards,

Winslow

Winslow


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Indeed, Winslow. :(

    Thank you for your review, my friend.

    I hope to see you again very soon.

    kindest regards

    trimple
Comment by
Mark D. R.
5-7-5 or Haiku
 
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Although this was submitted as a six-word entry, it is likely that a Japanese Haigu artist would convert your verse into a traditional Haiku poem.

Regardless, your selected illustration is a great combo for your restricted verse.

Thanks for my look.

Mark


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Thank you kindly, Mark

    You're right! This could make an interesting haiku poem. A sad one...
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