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BeasPeas
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Hi Tracey. The image together with the poem are outstanding. You've said a lot in three lines. We dump trash and sewerage into the oceans without a thought to the creatures who live there. Marilyn


 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    These are tough to write I find.

    Thanks Marilyn

    Glad you enjoyed this

    love tracey
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Oh, Tracey -- love your message here in only six words -- a great offering for the contest!! :) I would only suggest that, perhaps, that colon is not needed there in line two....? :) ;) Your call...it's just such a limited format that you don't want to distract from your message with folks trying to concentrate to 'do right' by the punctuation....:) :) ;)You know, you could make this into a poster to sell... it's really good! :) Just wonderful, ma'am -- thank you so very much for sharing with all of us! :) ;) Yvette

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you Yvete

    Is this okay now?

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Pam (respa)
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-Good image and presentation, Tracey.
-You have used the six words well.
-The message is an important one.
-We have vast worlds under the ocean,
full of life, but environmentally, we
are "suffocating" them.
-The last line is an effective conclusion
with the play on the word blue.
-Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Pam :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Feb-2019
    You are welcome.

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    :)
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