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Failure is not an option!!!


We should never give up when we fail. Press on!!!

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This is a lovely poem... you may fall but get up, you have work to do. When God gives you this message that his love will never fail you don't have to worry, you can lean on him. You keep at it until you succeed. Uplifting words.


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reply by the author on 30-May-2020
    Hello AJ McCall,
    Thank you so much, I am grateful for your review, rating and kind words. God bless you richly!!

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    Thank you!

reply by AJ McCall on 30-May-2020
    and your welcome
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Your poem is very inspirational and vividly descriptive, encouraging all to keep on keeping on. I do see somewhat of a contradition between the title and the theme of the poem. The poem says failures WILL occur; the title says failure is NOT an option.


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reply by the author on 30-May-2020
    Thank you, Janice. I will try to figure out which is the best way to change it. Have a blessed day.
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I appreciate this spiritual/uplifting poem in simple down to earth and meaningful verses; trials and tribulations are facts of life and one must never despair; thanks for sharing and good luck!


 Comment Written 29-May-2020



reply by the author on 30-May-2020
    Hello Ameen,
    Thank you for the kind review, rating and kind words. Have a beautiful blessed day:-)
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Good on you Joyce, you are God's favoured child, and He delights in watching His children, dusting themselves off, and "getting back on the horse". That's what it's all about, He doesn't have spoilt children, We are born to rulership, and that's how we learn to be Kings and Queens in His kingdom. A super post my friend, enjoyed it, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 30-May-2020
    Hi Roy,
    Thank you so much for the kind review, rating and kind words. As long as we have and serve Jesus, we will always succeed. Have a beautiful blessed day:-)

reply by royowen on 30-May-2020
    We will indeed
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A very well-written free verse poem about failures that sometimes are coming our way, through the hardships in life we learn determination to go on until we see success.


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reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Hi Sandra,
    How are you? I pray your day is going well. Thank you for my review and rating. We must press on through our troubles. Joy comes in the morning. Have a blessed weekend.
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Fine sentiments here and your rhyming end rhymes mean this is not exactly a free write for the contest so my may want to make some adjustments Joy before the judging, love Dolly x


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reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Oh ok, thanks Dolly. Are you saying I shouldn't have rhymes because it's a free verse. Thank you for your review and rating. Enjoy this brand new day, today.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 29-May-2020
    Free-write usually means no rhyming Joy, love Dolly x

reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Thank you, Dolly. Well, I will do my very best to remember this great piece of information. I really don't like trying to rhyme anyway. But, I like learning new things. Again, thank you. God bless you richly.
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Excellent, Joy. I can tell by your very good poem, you are a very tenacious
lady. I would like to award you a six, but I have used all of them. The only way you can survive is by getting up again when you get knocked down.


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reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Yes sir. Every day is a brand new day to enjoy our life. Have a blessed day. Keep smiling.
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A great way to live life! Never give up~ Just one step at a time~ You'll figure it out in the end and you'll be glad you didn't give up and went back to try again!
Patty


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reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Hi Patty,
    Thank you so much for the review and rating. No pity parties. Keep trying. May your day be the best day ever!! Blessings to you.
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The author's words are uplifting, engaging, descriptive and creative.
I found this poem to inspire one to trust in the Lord. And to always get up and keep going. Thank you for the author's notes they complimented the theme of this poem. Have a great weekend!


 Comment Written 28-May-2020



reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Hi Harmony,
    I pray all is well in your life. Thank you for the kind review and rating. Blessings to you.
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Failure is not an option!!!
by joycetreasures

Hello, Joyce,

Great entry for the FREE VERSE ! Contest.

The title reminds me of my ex-husband. He had that phrase on his refrigerator door. It's a good concept.


 Comment Written 28-May-2020



reply by the author on 28-May-2020
    Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
    I hope you are doing well. Thanks for the review, rating and your feedback. I'm enjoying your book. Take care.
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