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.... a full frontal rant .....

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Debra White
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Richard,
Completely on your side re this rant - People who litter have no pride, no shame and no respect. It is my pet hate. There is just no excuse for it. Hashtagsadmetoo!
I have been known to chase unused dog poo bags that have accidentally blown from my coat pocket, for miles just so that I'm not leaving rubbish behind.
Your piece is very descriptive and leaves us with a clear picture of the mess that you deal with on a regular basis.
Hats off to you for tackling the problem.
My favourite line is the litter picker line - bet you wish you had a spear though!
Best wishes, Debra :)


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Debs,

    Thanks for your comments.

    Sometimes it's ok to write about ordinary things with a metaphorical meaning.

    Thanks,

    Richard.

reply by Debra White on 14-Feb-2019
    Any time :)
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HealingMuse
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Excellent write, my friend! You have a great point. Why plastic Nature, indeed! Hmmmm must be the same group behind creating the plastic as those pumping the cooland and lubricant out of the only planet to sustain life. For greed.

So heartbreaking to read of people disrespecting our planet this way.

But, on the up side, we have wonderful people like you to volunteer and help balance the scales back a bit towards respectfulness.

Thank you for sharing your great work, your author's nptes, and all you do to help the planrt!

Jan


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thanks for you understanding comments.
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