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Black Cadillac


Jack put the pedal to the metal.

  24 total reviews 
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Tina Crute
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This is awesome! I almost felt like I was watching a movie because you made the scene come alive. It made me anxious and I read it fast. You are very creative! Great writing!

Tina


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Thanks so much dear fan story friend.lolol liberty justice

reply by Tina Crute on 07-Apr-2019
    You are so
    welcome!
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Treischel
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Amen and 5 stars for the exciting poetic portrayal of a car chase in a Black Cadillac. Even though the meter was variable, it worked well. Nicely composed also with variable rhming. Stanza 1: abab rhymed. Stanza 2: ccdc rhymed. Stanza 3: efee rhymed. Stanza 4: ghgh. Stanza 5: iijj. Stanza 7: klml Stanza 8: nono. So you managed coupled, alternating and skipping rhyme patterns. Excellent poetic imagery of speed, drunkeness, and elusive behavior. Nice alliteration in "driving drugging drinking," and "whiskey wasted." So glad it scared him sober. Well written.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thanks Treischel lovely detailed review. liberty justice
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way2gokevs
 
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This is such a great poem, I really enjoyed reading this. Yes there are people we know that would fit the poem you have so beautifully written. Thanks for sharing, have a great day. cheers, Kev


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
    Thanks for lovely star review and review lots more.lolol liberty justice
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Gert sherwood
 
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Gert sherwood Recommends:
Words are the Fruit of Poetry
I like sitting under our apple tree
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Hello Liberty Justice
I had to smile that you picked the right
title from the list provided for use in this
Contest as I was reading it, I sang it to the tune of Johnny Cash song of how he build his black Cadillac .
Gert


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
    Thanks for lovely exceptional review. liberty justice

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    Please send ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button. lolol liberty justice

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    SEND ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button.
    I books are not selling well and this hurts me and stresses me out. See my books on my profile. Please read review more of my writings. lolol liberty justice
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Mike Stevens
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An excellent cautionary tale, L. J--the problem seems to be that the person with the problem doesn't see him or herself as HAVING a problem, they won't get help until they hurt or kill someone


 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
    Thanks lovely review. lolol liberty justice

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    SEND ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button.
    I books are not selling well and this hurts me and stresses me out. See my books on my profile. Please read review more of my writings. lolol liberty justice
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Wabigoon
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Liberty--
No, not from me, not an amen. Oh, a congrats, perhaps. But I'm not the "amen, brothers and sisters" type, which I'm sure you would know from what I write. Even if our Jack did get religion I don't think it needs to be prominent in the poem. I sort of like his "badness" a bit and I think you do too. So maybe in one life Jack got caught and hung out to dry out, in another he crashed his pretty ass and in a third, okay, he got religion and, well, in a fourth he said to himself, "I gotta be smart if I'm gonna me." I quibble with a couple of word choices like: "sped zoomed away" but otherwise it's a fine poem.

Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff


 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
    Thanks Wabigoon for your fascinating review lolol liberty justice

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    SEND ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button.
    I books are not selling well and this hurts me and stresses me out. See my books on my profile. Please read review more of my writings. lolol liberty justice

reply by Wabigoon on 07-Mar-2019
    Liberty--
    I like your gumption. That's an old fashioned word, I like your "animus." I do not know how to help you here. I have two books out, one poetry. self published. The other dreams and not self published but on a really skimpy budget. I should probably try to sell these on Amazon but the reports from there, those that go that route are discouraging. It is not a writers world. What I am trying to do to combat this is to refresh the purpose of writing and art and re-declare or prove that it is not just window-dressing, but powerful, necessary

    However, the publishing and other words seem to have been so successfully taken over by the computer, cell phones and all that means so that the battle line has changed more to the "technological singularity" as envisioned in the Terminator movies, say, for me. So, I do not know how to help you here. Me buying your book from Amazon will help a bit but not solve the problem. Want to buy mine? I doubt it unless what I say is mindbendingly important. So, just talk to me about this if you can. It is a problem all writers, no matter their content. face.

    Best
    Jeff

reply by Wabigoon on 08-Mar-2019
    Liberty--
    I will review more when I have some sixes. I have none at the moment and your writing may be better than that. So, please be patient.

    Jeff

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
    Thanks, Jeff, for reviewing all my portfolio. lolol liberty justice

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
    SEND name of a designer host website I can sell my two books and people can use their credit or debit card and push "buy now" button. lolol liberty justice

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
    SEND name of a designer host website I can sell my two books and people can use their credit or debit card and push "buy now" button. lolol liberty justice

reply by Wabigoon on 09-Mar-2019
    Liberty--
    I simply do not have the information you seek. There are others on this site who might have it. I might suggest rspoet, Mastery, probably others who have books for sale. There are quite a few. As I said, when I have some sixes I will take a longer look at your portfolio.
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dragonpoet
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This is a well told story with rhyme. It tells of how dangerous it is to drive under the influence of drugs of any kind. He was lucky he didn't get hurt and probably now realizes that now that rehab is working.

Good luck and keep writing

Joan


 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
    Thanks for amazing review.lolol liberty justice

reply by dragonpoet on 05-Mar-2019
    You're welcome.

    Joan

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    SEND ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button.
    I books are not selling well and this hurts me and stresses me out. See my books on my profile. Please read review more of my writings. lolol liberty justice

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
    SEND name of a designer host website I can sell my two books and people can use their credit or debit card and push "buy now" button. lolol liberty justice
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24chas
 
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Here I am, Liberty Justice. I really liked this. It was intense and I loved the flow of it. It grabbed me at the beginning and I felt like I was in a speeding car as I got to the end. Good job of putting this story to rhyme.


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thanks lovely stars new fan. Contest ended.lolol liberty justice

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    SEND ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button.
    I books are not selling well and this hurts me and stresses me out. See my books on my profile. Please read review more of my writings. lolol liberty justice
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Ricky1024
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I used to own a Cadillac Deville.
It drove so smooth I would almost fall asleep.
There are many less Drunks today in New Jersey thanks to the Laws.
Drink and Drive more than Twice?
Destroy?
Lose your License for Life!
Good Luck.
Ricky


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
    Thanks for lovely review. Read a few more of mine, also.

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    SEND ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button.
    I books are not selling well and this hurts me and stresses me out. See my books on my profile. Please read review more of my writings. lolol liberty justice
Comment by
Teri7
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Exceptional
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This is a very well done job for the contest. You used great descriptive and true words with very good imagery from the art work you chose. You got my vote for this. Loe and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
    Hi friend! Read a few of mine, also. Thanks for volunteering and telling me that I have your vote, Teri7, because it is so hard to win. Lovely stars!

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
    SEND ASAP a good popular website you and other writers use to sell your books--one that has a "buy now" button.
    I books are not selling well and this hurts me and stresses me out. See my books on my profile. Please read review more of my writings. lolol liberty justice
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