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Haha, Tracey!
This is such a good write. From the POV of a blackhead!! Brilliant! Gripped me from the start and had me laughing and gagging at the end! There's nothing as satisfying as squeezing out a blackhead, even though it's gross. Best of luck in the contest, Deb :)


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    Glad you enjoyed my bonkers tale, Deb :)

    I don't know what it is that we find so engrossing when we squeeze em, but I love squishing spots. lol

    kind regards

    tracey
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Okay, anybody who's had to deal with one of these in a sensitive spot will find this hilarious -- I know I did! ;) ;) Great idea for a 'twist at the end' 100-word offering! :) ;) I've included a few grammatical catches below - employ or ignore as you like. :) :) Thanx so much for sharing! ;) :) Yvette

and yet up until --> and yet, up until

me, yet she couldn't --> me, but she couldn't [you've got two 'yet's' close together]

Then last week, --> Then, last week,

last, leaving her face; blackhead --> last, leaving her face blackhead

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    Hi there, Yvette.

    Can you look at this again please?

    I think I had re-written this when you reviewed. :)

    Sorry
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Ewww ... that was gross and funny at the same time. The ending really surprised me, and I didn't see it coming. Best of luck in the contest.

Take care,
Russell


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    Thank you :)
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Oh dear this takes me back to those terrible teenage years. I have often wondered why it is OK in Germany to be called Schwarzkopf but the only coloured head surnames of which I am aware in English are Redhead and Whitehead.

word count by the way is spot on. Thanks for the laugh. This is clever.


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    Thank you, Jim
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He he he, this made me smile! It is also a bit disgusting! He he he, I wish you luck with the contest, I reckon this write will be the most unusual, love Dolly x

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    Thanks Dolly

    Someone had to do it! :)
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